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May 9th, 2015
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  1. Hey there :3
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  3. Firstly, terrain. I really like your terrain; the details, the layers - I can't fault it, good work.
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  5. Organics; I would thin out the trunks just a little, if I were you.
  6. That, or I'd bring the leaves out a bit, maybe add some branches too to make it easier :p
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  8. Lastly, structure. I like it a lot! I love the detailing, and you've got a really nice palette. The only thing I think needs fixing on it is the roof. Instead, I'd use full blocks instead of stairs. Maybe make it along the lines of this: https://imgur.com/a/Lr9Ab#0
  9. Don't copy it exactly, but use inspiration from it - it's the same style as your house ^.^
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  11. Good luck!
  12. - Dutty :3
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