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- Hey there! :3
- First off, I like the terrain. The flatness of the terrain on one side you've overcome with layered snow and some organics - this works well. I like the cliff; I like how you've mixed in cobble, it works with the theme of your plot. My only issue with it is the lack of atmosphere this plot has. I think it could be nice if you made some paths leading places, maybe guarded by occasional 'cobblestone wall' blocks.
- Your structures are really cute as well. You've made all the structures fit the theme but look different - it's rare that people manage to do that, so well done!
- Your organics are the only thing I kind of have an issue with. Spruce trees, and trees that you find in this kind of scene, are tall, with shorter branches, or long branches that point upwards. They also have spotted leaves over them. Could be nice to add some leaves to the trees, only a few, if you want to keep it wintery, like all the leaves have fallen. I get that.
- Good luck!
- - Dutty :3
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