R3E2 Jojolity Delibs

Judge Mishima (Logic)

Flexibility and setplay is a valid fighting style and the closing narration about full acceptance of the good and the bad of oneself is similarly cogent. A bit more narrative over the course of the strat to bring out that theme would have been nice (I appreciate the discussion of Cerise’s (rusty) skill with fencing), but a 7 feels fair.

Ravee speaks of the three fundamentals (likely “martial art, dance, and history”) but doesn’t really say what they are or what they mean in the context of the strat. The katas and their techniques are interesting, but my Technical/Readability comments from earlier resurface here as the strat doesn’t say what they are in the context of the school of the Ravee combat style, which is a shame because I find them really interesting and they could elaborate upon and deepen the philosophy. The poem ties the strat together, but like much of the flavor text wrt this Jojolity, it leaves me wanting further elaboration. As a result, I’m giving this a 7; you’ve clearly done the research, Jojolities like these are the opportunity to show and celebrate it.

Judge Hanma (Flame)

“Highlight the unique aspects, techniques, and philosophies of your fighting style!”
Ravee focuses on her style’s techniques, especially those utilizing the unique aspects of her stand—that said, how the techniques ascribe to the philosophies of the fighting style could be focused on more. **7**.
As for Cerise, flexibility certainly counts for the jojolity—largely focusing on being able to deal with each ACT and form of Ravee’s stand, and the acceptance of both sides of himself was a good philosophy touch. **7** as well.

Judge Tokita (Cory)

While there's not too much to say in particular with this match retty good show on both sides here! Ravee fashions all her moves as a flurry of dancing and martial arts that, while a bit skin-deep, absolutely  does show dedication to both crafts. A 7!

Meanwhile, Cerise manages both the many facets of himself internally and the many acts of Ravee's stand externally, a fun thematic throughline that thrusts thus across the text. Maybe a mite basic, but I like what I see, and it nets a 7!