Miscellaneous Fixes 5: Genicyst

Cuddling with a Hellmouth and pressing next puts nothing but the gem and XP amount on the bottom and prompts you to press it again to proceed.

Kiha.
>You call out to her, asking if she’s okay?
Am I unsure if I'm asking her?

Rape a tentacle beast.
>You feel bloated and stuffed as the beast reflexively sprays the entire contents of its seminal sacs... or whatever it stores its cum in... inside you.
Moth might have trouble sleeping at night knowing this exists as is.

Raping Akbal.
>Maybe he’s got a thing about dominance, from either angle.
"for" dominance?

Succubus gardener.
>Cumming almost comes as a surprise to you, but there’s only so much pleasure a body can receive before it helplessly and completely cumming, spraying thick wads of jism into the tentacle’s hungry folds with instinctive convulsions.
"before it helplessly and completely cumming" is not a real sentence.

Akbal.
>One more sudden yank causes him to be dragged forward along the ground Every muscle on his lean body is tense and you know this self-proclaimed “god” hates you.
Missing period after "ground".

>You flip the demon over; he barely suppresses a hiss as his sore ass hits the forest floor.
Sounds like furry anatomy to me.

Some dumbass named the lustzerker ability button in combat "Lustserk".

>Rubi stands on a long black spike that makes her walk as though she were wearing high heels.
Do both her feet use the same spike? This shouldn't be singular.
"Rubi stands on long black spikes that make her walk as though she were wearing high heels."

Pressing Back in Debug Info puts you into the main menu instead of Options.

Using Lumi's machine STILL puts you in her Shop menu instead of her main menu.

Aiko's Talk and Sex options should have a Back button leading to her main menu again and not a Leave button for going back to camp.

Stronghold demon centaur.
>Dropping down, youput your rump up in the air,
Not enough spaces.

>hedonistic desires your dual - endowed mistress’s milk instills in you.
Too many spaces.

I regret even going here. Black Cock.
>“What’s your name sport?”
Period after "name".

>you give him your name.,
Nice punctuation.

>and off to the side is a huge waggon.

>up into the waggon to retrieve his extra product.

All of the Black Cock is so, so bad. There is no quality control at all, buttons are all over the place, spelling errors are rampant, etc.

Helia's Sleep With and Sleep Alone should be in their own menu with a Next button like all other toggles.

Clicking on a button that's grayed out with a tooltip makes the tooltip disappear. This feels like one of those things that's really painful to fix, good luck.

Sylvia's Clothing menu's Back still puts you into her Talk menu.

>You’re not sure that it’s completely safe around here, but it dawns on you that you haven’t heard or seen any other signs of life on your trip. It seems the forest knows to stay away from the moth.
While not wrong, straight up calling it just "forest" carries implications of the actual Forest zone.

Can you encounter Sylvia in the Bog still after you have the Moth Cave location? It would make sense if you still encountered her very rarely. It could also be some additional content that way.

Would a "Maybe Later" choice be a bad idea for having children with her? Does the option when you decline let you revert the choice later on?

The Accept and Decline for attunement could have extra flavor with some tooltips.

After you accept attunement, the Leave button is in slot 5 instead of 14.

>You can’t quite see her—but then again you can’t exactly see anything right now—but you’re able to form some kind of indistinct impression of her. You’re not sure if this is just a hallucination, but it almost seems like she takes on color—a violent, regal purple in a pool of impenetrable black.
That "violent" is probably meant to be "violet". Found another instance where you called Dolores' eyes "violently violet", so not a typo.

Reverse cowgirl right after the attunement.
>She pushes you, and you stumble backwards onto your ass.
I'm fairly sure I was still laying down on her bed with her laying next to me.

>All of the different sensations assaulting you edge you on until you’re hanging by a thread.
That's a lot of consecutive (you)'s.

>But now, with you, I know I’m exactly where I need to be. I can never thank you enough for that.”Her quiet words slowly calm your troubled heart.
I need some space.

The second Spend Time option could use some tooltips to elaborate on what they entail. “Do you have any idea what your life will be like a year from now?” and choosing Kingdom doesn't really explain what the choice does, and some others are vague as well.

>“My mother taught me everything I know. When she died, I felt lost for a long time. This place is so ugly. Nothing here is nice, or clean, or... bright. That’s why when I saw you, I just knew.”
"This place" can also mean her cave when this talk happens there, which is not what she means I assume, the real subject being the bog.

If you're a minotaur cum addict and get the message "You sigh happily before you return to camp. You got just what you needed." it has three empty lines instead of one between it and "Four hours pass..."

minotaur scene.
>making it difficult to think as you feel your blood rush to your groin  and nipples.
Double space.

Demontaur in the stronghold.
>You prace forward, being sure to jostle her gurgling balls, and enjoy the spurts of lurid white liquid that escape her tremendous, pulsating member.
"prace" is not a word. It was probably intended to be prance, but that's such a faggot word for non-taurs.

>HORZ GOG button
I fucking hate furries. "Don't Change" works just fine, or "Horse Cock".

>our fingers sink into your gash with ease and set to work with ease.
Repetition.

>Breathy heavy with anticipation and lust,
"Breathing", not "Breathy".

>You rub that hot member around
"the", not "that".

>The knot stops you when it presses on your labia, your unready pussy not quite ready to take it.
Repetition.

>Reaching down, your hands find their way down to the swollen ballsack,
That should be "behind you". The anatomy of this whole scene is sketchy at best.

>A second after, you feel the first splashes of dog-jizz spurting into your tunnel. The first gushes of sperm effectively flood the love-canal,
Repetition of "first".

Minotaur mob.
>His flare slips inside with an audible, gut-stretching 'pop'.  Your loose pucker is now a little loose.The assembled beasts snicker at the noise, stroking themselves slowly while awaiting a chance at your hungry holes.
Two spaces before the loose ass message, none after.

>Wasting no time, the minotaur grinds his glans past your lips and tries to force the tip of his ERROR. INVALID CREATURE SPECIFIED to cockDescriptShort into your mouth. Snorting and grunting, he pushes your head against the cave wall as he shoves the tip past your teeth. The minotaur’s pre-cum pools in your mouth and dribbles out the corners, leaving trails of slime down your face.
Happens three more times in the same scene.

>(“Cathedral” added to Places menu.)
It says this every time you choose Don't Break and return.

>Which item will you use?
This line in the Inventory menu is pretty redundant and tacked onto the bottom of the Carpentry Supplies list.

Jojo offering you to meditate always has the Rape button (although disabled) unlike his main menu which removes it unless you have enough lust.

Ember Drakeheart Gifting.
>“W-what do you want, doofus?”
Kiha has calling you "doofus" pretty much trademarked as the only dragon allowed to do so.

You can't leave the third dungeon after you've entered.

Lethice fight chain loss.
>Curling demonic crowns grow from her temples like two halves of a majestic, white crown while smaller, nubbier growths protrude cutely from her forehead.
That "crowns" is probably supposed to be "horns".

>A girl could fall in love with feelings like
Unfinished sentence.

>It’s a wonderful feeling, getting to cum in front of an audience like
Another one.