BSI Commercial 1.1

Act 1:

N: This is Johnny. Johnny is an honest lad.

Johnny walks outside of cry astro doors

N: Johnny adores noodles. In fact, he loves them so much he would give up his life for them.

Johnny receives a distress signal.

N: And what better chance is there to prove his love than to save an innocent noodle machine in distress?

Johnny runs towards his RSI Aurora, starts the engines, and sets course for Daymar.



Act 2:

Johnny approaches Daymar.

Johnny lands in a middle of nowhere, not far from the machine.

N: It seems everything's going great for Johnny!

Johnny runs towards the machine and two pirates appear from behind it, swaggering with exaggerated arrogance and not even bothering to raise their guns at Johnny.

N: Be careful! Leaping before looking can be hazardous for your health!

Fade out.

Fade in, pirates are dancing next to the big benny's machine, wearing Johnny's gear while Johnny is escaping in his heavily-damaged ship.

N: Looks like Johnny might be short on credits, but his heart was in the right place.

Cockpit view, Johnny is in his flight suit with a starter helmet, flying away from Daymar.


Act 3:

N: Johnny now has a choice.  He can earn credits the honest way...

Switch to Johnny hauling boxes, people laugh at him (would be nice to have a credit chit-counting scene to emphasize earning good money).

N: Or he can take more... questionable approach.

Switch to drug lab scenes.
Johnny dancing in "premium environments."
Johnny spins around very fast with a camera mounted somewhere next to his chin (living the dream).


Act 4:

Narrator: It seems Johnny's taken a liking to the life of the rough and tumble.

Johnny killing other players.

N: Johnny's made some like-minded friends along the way.  They've captured a local CryAstro, and are charging astronomical rates for entry!  Bad boy, Johnny!

As above. Blowing somebody's ship up.

N: Everything appears to be going to well for Johnny, but what's this...?

One of Johnny's friends explodes, then the next one, etc. Fade out.

Fade in. Johnny is left alone, and his ship faces the entire fleet of BSI PMC's professionally and symmetrically arranged in front of him in a hemisphere, the largest ship taking the centerpiece.

N: It seems the good people of Crusader have had enough, and have informed the Black Star Initiative of Johnny's whereabouts.

The camera zooms out on the bay of an Avenger as johnny stands in the opening, facing a firing line of BSI personnel with two BSI Hornets (preferably Super Hornets) flanking the Avenger in the background, either flying or landed (Preferably with a sunset/sunrise in the background) and a Retaliator with two Hornets flanking it flying diagonally across the top of the shot from right to left.  The ramp then closes on Johnny, thus sealing his fate.

N: Contact the Black Star Initiative today, create a better tomorrow!


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