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- Hello DeathTorch3!
- My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. Lets start off with your structure
- Your structure is lacking depth and detail. Both your windmill and bridge. They look plain and flat as is. Try to push in the walls of your windmill and add blocks such as stairs/slabs for detail and depth. For reference, go to ./warp depthtutorial.
- You have no organics on your plot. Organics are things such as trees, flowers, animals, anything that is alive basically. Usually initiates do trees so I suggest adding some to your plot.
- You terrain is pretty decent and your river has a nice flow with it. You could smooth the edges a little more thou. If you're gonna add a sugar cane, make it so it has friends (more sugar cane). You terrain could use some other blocks for color and variation such as green clay, cobblestone, dirt, etc. You cave is a nice edition.
- I think your plot needs some work before you can rank up to novice. Listen to my suggestions and you could rankup in no time. Good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D
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