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- 00:42:419 (2) - This could be a 1/2 just fine as the held sound does last until the red tick
- 01:03:103 (4) - This slider should be snapped according to the new timing point and not the prior one. Manipulating the slider's length through slider velocity is the best way to handle that
- 01:53:454 (1) - Not having this as a 1/4 slider feels inconsistent when compared to the other similar vocals begin representated with them. I'd recommend just using a 1/4 slider
- 02:27:932 (3,4) - Would look nicer if the sliderborders did not touch one another like this
- 02:37:573 (1,2,3) - Some unsnapped sliderends
- 03:36:895 (1) - This probably should not have whistles aside the head considering it's placed on similar sounds as 01:14:814 (1) -
- Hyper
- 00:16:879 (1,2,3,4) - Pattern could look nicer if the 2 and 3 weren't lined up like that. It would create more consistent movement as well with the rest of the section
- 00:25:167 (1,2,3) - (and other similar patterns) I don't think these have to be spaced this much. It's just too big of a difference when compared to the rest of the calm section as there isn't really anything different about these sounds. Would recommend spacing them closer to the rest of the section
- 00:37:065 - A whistle would fit here pretty well
- 01:02:061 - This should be a clickable I think. Making the 1/1 slider a tick shorter and having a 1/4 reverse slider here would be a better way to go about the rhythm here
- 02:13:763 - Clap
- 02:51:028 (4,1) - This jump is unusually big and might be a bit hard for this diff. I'd personally make it smaller but I understand what you want to represent with this
- 03:35:518 (3,4) - This might be read as a 1/2 gap as it looks basically similar as what gaps such as 03:31:390 (1,2) - look like. I'd recommend going for something closer like 02:34:662 (7,1) - or alternatively making the 1/2 gaps bigger like here 01:09:305 (1,2,3,4) -
- Insane
- 00:14:814 (3) - It'd feel better if this was two hitcircles imo
- 01:56:901 - Should have a clap
- 02:11:376 (3) - This should definitely end on the red tick
- 02:17:602 (1) - 03:14:128 (1) - Snapped wrongly for some reason
- Futon
- 00:26:205 (4,2) - These could be patterned better as the overlap isn't necessarily patterned in the end like the rest of the map feels to be like
- 00:29:643 (1,1,1) - Kinda inconsistent with the rest of the fast sliders after the death metal parts. I think it would benefit from begin similar to the other patterns
- 00:52:762 (1,2) - Consider adding a bit more spacing so the pattern would fit a bit better to the rest of the chorus
- 00:57:756 (6,7) - I don't think this should be placed like this. I assume it's a mistake since the rest of the section is super flowy to certain direction
- 02:46:889 (3,4) - Lower spacing for these would compliment the other more important sounds better I think
- 03:46:547 (1,2) - These vocals could be represented better I think. Even CTRL Ging the rhythm would improve it a lot
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