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- Hey there :3
- Firstly, terrain. I have nothing bad to say about it! I like the multiple layers you have and the palette you've used. If I was to say anything, it'd be just to recommend mixing some more ice in the snow/stone like you already have done. I'd also want to see some more 'decoration', to add atmosphere to the terrain. You could make some rocks/frozen ponds etc.
- Secondly, organics. Your large tree is really great, but the trunk needs some smoothing. It looks a bit too jagged right now! I also think you need to add some more layers to the roots, so they're not all flat!
- As for your smaller trees, you need to make the leaves a little bushier - it may be easier if you add some more branches.
- And as you have //replace, why not change all the logs to 6 sided logs? cx It might look nicer.
- Lastly, structures. The structures you have are really cute and suit the style of the plot. However, as they're quite simple, you're going to need some more on your plot; maybe a tower so it's taller, or at least a larger biuld somewhere?
- Good luck!
- - Dutty :3
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