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May 28th, 2015
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  1. Hey there :3
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  3. Firstly, terrain. I have nothing bad to say about it! I like the multiple layers you have and the palette you've used. If I was to say anything, it'd be just to recommend mixing some more ice in the snow/stone like you already have done. I'd also want to see some more 'decoration', to add atmosphere to the terrain. You could make some rocks/frozen ponds etc.
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  5. Secondly, organics. Your large tree is really great, but the trunk needs some smoothing. It looks a bit too jagged right now! I also think you need to add some more layers to the roots, so they're not all flat!
  6. As for your smaller trees, you need to make the leaves a little bushier - it may be easier if you add some more branches.
  7. And as you have //replace, why not change all the logs to 6 sided logs? cx It might look nicer.
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  9. Lastly, structures. The structures you have are really cute and suit the style of the plot. However, as they're quite simple, you're going to need some more on your plot; maybe a tower so it's taller, or at least a larger biuld somewhere?
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  11. Good luck!
  12. - Dutty :3
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