GregroxMun

guzcomic script

Jan 5th, 2023 (edited)
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  1. panel 1:
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  3. Guz is sobbing and bubbling in a jeffries tube, offscreen.
  4. Rutherford is climbing up a ladder which is dripping with green goo.
  5. R: oh, gross, what is this, a coolant leak?
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  7. Panel 2:
  8. Rutherford peeks his head into the jeffries tube and sees a melted green puddle with a flattened engineering uniform in the middle.
  9. R (quietly) ohhh oh no...
  10. R: Hey, Ensign Guz? Is that you?
  11. Guz: sobs louder.
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  13. Panel 3:
  14. Rutherford scoots over to sit down next to Guz' puddle.
  15. R: So uh, Billups sent me to check up on the sound...
  16. Guz's sobbing goes quiet, and she sniffles a little bit. She manifests a mouth or a face and says "sorry." She pulls her goo back into her uniform.
  17. R: are you okay?
  18. G: No...
  19. R: do you want to talk about it?
  20. G: ...ok.
  21. R: What's wrong?
  22. G: s..so... m--much. I--i--can't...
  23. R: Well, uh, why don't we start with what you're doing in the tubes? It's not your shift for another 6 hours.
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  25. Panel 4:
  26. G: I was trying to distract myself from being overstimulated
  27. R: Mhm
  28. G: so I decided to go work on the impulse field regulator...
  29. R: Oh yeah! We've been riding roughly at impulse the past few weeks!
  30. G: but I... I guess I was so... so STUPID that I got...
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  32. Panel 5:
  33. dif from panel 4: rutherford puts his hand down on his outstretched leg. he's frowning/shocked. guz is melting.
  34. G: ...LOST.
  35. R: l...lost?
  36. G: I KNOW. I'm such a TERRIBLE engineer. I'm so BAD at my job. (she begins to melt again)
  37. R: Wha--no! there's no one who knows reaction control systems and impulse theory better than you do!
  38. G: *sniff.*
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  41. Panels 6-7
  42. closeup on Guz, looking at her face. she looks awkward to the side.
  43. R, off-screen: hey, i understand what it's like, being overwhelmed and overstimulated. What happened?
  44. Guz focuses her eyes on the viewer
  45. G: Do you know ensign Tendi?
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