XxDangerAheadxX Plot Review

Hello XxDangerAheadXx!!!

My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today! Lets start off by talking about your structure.

Your structure is pretty well detailed and complex, but i think the design and depth needs some work. Some detail aspects of your structure seem repetitive so u might wanna change that. I like how you used a variety of different blocks when detailing your structure. It gives it a color and makes it looks less dull and plain. Your roof needs some work and looks too rugged. The sides of your structure could use some detailing and depth too. You bridge could used some work too cuz it looks awkward in the position/area that it's in.

For your organics, you only have one tree. Try to make more than one tree, and make sure the trees are different. The trunk is too thick and should go from thick with roots on the bottom to skinny with branches when reaching the top. I love how you added the apples thou. +1

For your terrain, it is really awesome compared to other initiate plots. I could see that you have put a lot of effort into it. I love how you made the waterfall out of glass and the cavern is a nice addition. Although, the waterfall does seem flat when running down the side, and the cavern needs to be smoother. Actually, some aspects of your terrain really need some smoothing. The stone walls give a nice effect and detailing/realism to the terrain.

Overall, I think u need to change and alter a few things and that you have shown a lot of effort on your plot. I Therefore, I am ranking you to novice. I want u to change the things on your plot before u start your next build. ./warp novice and ./plot auto to start your new plot when you finish. Good Luck and I hope to see your other creations in the future. :D