@ThatRandomPerson42
http://www.smogon.com/forums/threads/uxie-qc-0-3.3606744/
Firstly, rename the set to just "Support"

"•Though it may not be your first choice as a lead Pokemon, Uxie's movepool and great defense stats can make it viable for RU, setting itself apart from other leads."

it isn't a lead pokemon specifically -- rephrase that to a stealth rock user and mention the specific advantages it possesses in that bullet point


"•Yawn can be used to make opposing Pokemon like entry hazard removers and Pokemon with SE moves have tendencies to switch out, giving Uxie a chance to use U-Turn to grab momentum to switch to Pokemon of your advantages."


mention not pokemon with super effective moves but moreso hazard removers are pressured and forced to switch out lest they get put to sleep, allowing to keep rocks and get momentum w/ uturn usually



"•148 speed EVs are used to outspeed max speed Hoopa and Cloyster."

state why this is important; just stating a benchmark does no good to a newer user
rephrasing it to: "used to outspeed max speed base 70s, including Hoopa and Cloyster. This allows Uxie to get off a last ditch Psychic or cripple them with Thunder Wave or Yawn successfully." seems better



"•Levitate, the only ability of Uxie, is useful, as it can attempt to pivot through or cripple Pokemon without having to take damage or get slowed down from most entry hazards."

is false since it takes sr. mention specifically its immunity to spikes which makes maintaining its health easier and levitate allows it to pivot into things such as scarf Flygon or Gligar






"•Max HP and 108 defense EVs could be set to take on the many physical attackers in the tier and to set up Stealth Rock, with the Bold nature boosting the defense stat."

move this sentence under the speed remarks and just something along the lines of "the rest of the evs, alongside a bold nature, are poured into physical bulk to prime to take on many of the physical attackers in the tier" is probably better



"•Uxie is a decent lead in RU, and most of the time, it should be safe to lead with."

delete this: Uxie isn't a designated lead


Team Options
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"•If Uxie has Memento, setup sweepers like Linoone and Flygon may appreciate the lowering of their opponent's attack and special attack stats."

put this at the end of this section since memento isn't even slashed on your current set
mentio offensive partners that appreciate being brought in for free via a slow uturn




"•It can also serve as a field setter, having a role on setting up Trick Room, Rain Dance, or others. However, certain terrain movesets aren't the best movesets for it, as other Pokemon are preferred for the same role. For instance, Drought Torkoal is better at sun utility than sun setter Uxie."

just delete the last two sentences about sunny day and join this bit "•Mental Herb is another item option, but unless you plan on continuing to use it as a utility Pokemon mid game, it isn't really needed, as Taunt leads aren't very common in RU. It is also only recommended for the Trick Room set." into the Trick Room and detach Rain Dance from it since they are completely different

Something like: "It can also serve as a field setter, having a role for setting up Trick Room. With this set, it is usually recommended to run Mental Herb, allowing it to set up Trick Room almost guaranteed due to its high natural bulk. However, this significantly takes away from its bulk due to the lack of recovery. Typically, running minimum speed on this set is also preferred."


"•Colbur Berry is an item Uxie can carry, but that will remove its only form of recovery."
"•Knock Off is an option for Uxie, but it's not easy trying to fit that into movesets."

mention their advantages !!

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overall you really need to beef this up quite a bit so spend a bit more time writing

- Eren