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  1. Yanrarity- Commonfolk PtII Complete
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  3. Q&A
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  5. How did Rarity get wings? Is she not a normal Pony within the series? I had decided beforehand that They are pegasi from Greek folklore rather than common ponies known in MLP. This to me helps bring out more of the supernatural nature within the series and also gives it more of a humanistic view of a god-like pegasi than that of a atypical one to help flesh out more of the setting, that then help bring out the nature of their personalities.
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  7. Note: Let me apologize still, by saying i was always expecting to get this out in February or so but unfortunately due to the whole virus in 2020 thing and the scare it brought my attention was set on my own family so i had to kind of be there for awhile just in case something had happened. Now that the virus is not as deadly as i thought i decided to go back writing and to get back into the swing of things for the ponyfolk starving for content. I also did my best to make sure this was long and well compact. 4.5X longer than my original work Commonfolk I. This will be the last story to conclude the Yanrarity adventure with anon. Who was captured by someone who admired him despite the fact humans and ponies can not intermingle. Will it be a tale of tragedy or a tale of love by all evil conquers all?
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  10. In the background a shadowy figure of a human once full of life becomes enslaved to protect, love and to not leave the ever-loving elegant Yanrarity, one of the worlds hidden treasures. The world is of Marble and of stone. He then hears from a more mature and yet refined voice “Would you mind cleaning my cutie mark beloved anon?” Anon then sets out for the brush to clean Yanrarities mane which she feels so blessed and happy. She just has to show anon the present from her magical powers of projecting the past.
  11. She powers with her feminine strength, a crystal ball to remind her of their romance and the years spent drifting along time itself. While using Anon's seed, to then give birth to more children, and uses some of the spells she learned from Twilight's book and her wand to split the seeds of ponies into something abstract.
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  13. Children that were birthed, a variance of Satyrs, Ponies, Centaurs, and humans thanks to close genetics between building civilizations, magic, and diversity of high grade species. As for the mating rules of this civilization priod the only time they are allowed outsider blood and relationships is if it is approved by Queen Rarity through testing of Magic and Grading to ensure royal blood is not tainted to cause more trouble for ponykind in the future by elimination of subversive natures and brutal violent savages, that possessed the lowest blood of the dysgenetic or to potentially overthrow the empire and undue societal progress. Thanks to this by Queen Rarity she ensured more land was taken and less of the worst elements remained with hopes it would be down to 0.04% in 200 years. Those that were good enough to be spared were that of skills, decent work mentality, a faithfulness to ones society and talent had to give birth to ensure gradiation of higher end diversity. And then with these types of ponies with royal blood mixed in with that of young noble workers, that are able to build a futuristic empire to not only heal wounds of broken severed societies, but create floating mechanical ships, vortex's, printing out buildings through pure magic itself.
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  15. As time pressed evermore forward, Ponykind began to grow and prosper, the outer reaches of heaven into the sky became more of a travel destination thanks to Teleportation pod tunnels that would be 40X the speed of a bullet train and that which visages of the previous civilization could only see in movies. The Moon began to illuminate with protection and the source of the psychic fuel as the various kinds of Ponies worked into the night, showing themselves into the dimly light lantern lights, to have some having purple hair, some having anons personality of work ethic, some centaurs, some humans, some pegasi, some ponies a piece of the lineage moves upward through a stream of water. Feeling a connection to the culture through Pony Gods, their children that had joy without ever having to worry about wandering outside for the night due to monsters or various evil entities that would have taken them never to be heard from again. Families are safe, and the peasantry even more so. They would die before allowing the country to be taken away from them.
  16. Queen Rarity then decreed "your standing within the Empire will be dependent on how much Anon and my blood resides within your veins, and how useful you are to the society you are in, and lastly how strong you are within the conquering of land" to help distinguish a clear outline for who is and is not nobility and the successor in line. She then proceeds inside her villa for the night while in the spa with anon who has learned to enjoy the love given to him by Rarity as the time has wavered forward like those who walked with the sands of time like water bearers.
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  18. As the inked moon gave way to the beckoning sun, and recycled once more into the night. Queen Rarity and Anon hear a noise, and begin to worry an invader had come in the Villa through the window. But no it was Twilight Sparkle, flying in with her pegasi wings and drifted in through the top window that was open in the villa home for fresh air of the meadow trees from outside. Relieved only for a few minutes Rarity seems joyful but a bit more nervous than she lets on, just before Anon could ask what she is so nervous about. Twilight Sparkle then is transformed into Trixie, and she has a slyly smug smile from her face. Rarity then yells for the gaurds, but realizes as she said that Trixie set up a force-field around them and the guards have been trying to bypass the magical field for awhile falling on their hooves and rolling over in pain.
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  20. Anon is then tied by dark magic of Snakes that bind and roll over anon close Trixie as she shines valliently, with such grace and the sunlight as it lowers shows beams of purple and pink ultraviolet. Queen Rarity is shocked, and is starting to realize that she can not protect anon, and that she would do anything to keep him by her side, even if this meant betraying ones own ideals of a gauntlet battle. Trixie knocks Anon unconscious by having the snakes turn into a small bolt of lightning and rests him on her back then begins flying away. Queen Rarity tries to send a blast of ribbons that can tie Trixie to the ground. But as it hits, a doll version of Trixie falls to the ground With a Sepia colored letter. With what felt like almost half a Queen Rarity feels saddened, depressed, angry, all emotions in a whirlwind that can devastate the balance of Human-Pegasi kind.
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  22. Twilight Sparkle then appears and Rarity says "Trixie give me back Anon i need him RIGHT NOW" Twilight Sparkle then with her ponies and pegasi infantry looked startled and perplexed. "Wasen't anon with you awhile back? I was going to snatch him away to build an empire of my own one that was about Research and development for Magic and to help for greater Equestra that chooses to stay isolationist for our own species. For some hooves on training :3. Its only fair since you blackmailed me shirking off my duties to help Spike and to tell Princess Celestia the Alicorn god of all Ponies.” Rarity then realizes it is the honest and yet fiendishly booksmart Twilight Sparkle that encapsulates Pegasi Wizardry, not a false illusion or an idealistic phantom.
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  24. “Listen Twilight i know what i did was absolutely horribly wrong, i do feel awful, but do you not realize that love knows no bounds, and all is fair in love and war?” echoes a noble proud but also slightly perturbed Queen Rarity. Twilight of the Wizardry Pegasi responds “ Yes this i know, but if you go through with this, you may violate the codes of Pegasi-Human treaties and Celestia may cast final judgement” Queen Rarity understood what this meant. If she were to duel and to go scorched earth against Trixie the illusionist kind of marauder Pegasi, it may give way to blood lust like it had been so many times before. All to devour friend, or foe, to cast aside or to enslave without anons knowledge. Celestia god of the Pegasi knew this was never against the rules, only because it was not invading into another land through imperialism but defending ones sovereignty through the nations state and defending those who wished to trade and travel freely across border lines.
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  26. But what will be against Celestia’s rule-book and Twilight the Wizardry pegasi knew is that this would mean going onto the land and performing impearlism from those who wish to defend what is left of their land. Once a pony queen is killed, her land and her people are automatically given to the victor. Even though the illusionist maruaders never seeked to conquer, they did not kill, they always did go around the rulebook and used illegal means to sow division amongst others in countries to destabilize and conquer through puppetry and false leaders of certain areas. If Queen Rarity gained the land she would nearly own 2 to 3/3rds of land which would be against the law. Queen Rarity could not be bothered and delegated the task of what would happen to Celestia and to other ponies of foreign land away from the Rarity-Anon kingdoms and areas to Twilight for which she asked for land of her own and a castle in one of the closer areas. Queen Rarity was very reluctant due to the clever behavior of Twilight, but Queen Rarity knew she had no other leverage, due to her being on the receiving end of blackmail and the fact that despite what Queen Rarity did, Twilight was always fiercely loyal to the cause and made sure prosperity prevailed no matter what divisions happened.
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  28. Queen Rarity began to look up at the sky, to see clouds radiate in blue and orange glow. The purple dust that swept around her beautiful hooves and her ribbon that swayed in the wind along with her mane. She realized it was her oath to not only the future of souls born but to a future of society that can live a comfy yet secure existence. To raise ones own child, and to ensure that even if they do not have money, they will always have the tools to create what is beyond themselves for their societies respectively and to be able to not worry of strife, retirement, and the end stages. That is the hope of Queen Rarity, to dress the world in beauty, to create masterpieces, inspire others and to create prosperity of the state with her immortal darling anon.
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  31. As she sleeps, she dreams of anon, all she can do is hope for his safety while the guards, Twilight of the Wizardry Pegasi go over the 6 hour battle plan. Rarity will conquer, Rarity will divide, Rarity will kill and lust for a night with anon again, she repeats this in her sleep, she can not forgive the uncouth, unsavory and bewitching, scheming Trixie who has decided to become a thorn in her hooves. It is not Trixie to decide the future of civilization of Pony-Humankind but the queen of Equestria Rarity...
  32. As Queen Rarity awakens she readies her gear and her forces along with Twilight. They begin to gather around the meeting place in a old yet nostalgic gladiator arena, where Trixie snarkly mocked Queen Rarity in the letter to “come hence forth you mischievous two faced harlequin face me for the fate of anon, you only care for your imagery than that of your people, you are a false idol that does not care for the creatures of life but to subject those into loyalty and harm, you only used anon for your civilization’s talent stock to not care about others but your blind aspirations of idealism” Queen Rarity knows of these subversive tricksters that have ruined kingdoms, pitted people against queens and kings tearing down civilization into the Stonehenge, while those who are illusionists and thieves steal behind the scenes.
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  34. “Here she is” says Queen Rarity in an angered tone, Trixie then appears with her body covered in shiny purple and aqua stars, her hair translucent like glass, with a cape of diamonds. Her stance mockery of Queen Rarity, and her eyes confident ready for any false moves to exploit, any openings of weakness. The battlefield becomes a massive warzone around the arena, with Pegasi Vs Illuionist Warlocks. Each exchanging blows, some out maneuvered by the strength and speed of Pegasi, others confused by the cloning of their own Pegasi to attack themselves. All that is left is Twilight flying in the distance as the wind is blowing around Queen Rarity and Trixie the illusionist. Rarity and Trixie exchange magic blows both keep missing, all throughout Rarity is trying to use her magical abilities to try and wear down Trixie, all the while Trixie is then using multiple’s of herself, or using words to get a rise from Rarity. Both are experts at understanding of each other’s tricks and tactics it all seems evenly matched. The battle wages on for Anon and the future of civilization of Pony-Humankind. The twists and turns keep happening on each page, Rarity seems to have an advantage at first with getting Trixie in a corner and then Trixie almost manages to have Rarity in her clutches. They then ram into each other with their Pony heads like Ram’s and begin to charge into each other with radial energies, contrasting personalities one love. One final push, one final shove and one final result of awakening blood lust between the two Pegasi and the whole place is torn down in one huge explosion burst.
  35. Queen Rarity manages to prevail, as Trixie is torn in half. Gored. Guts with blood spill all over for the gods, where she rammed into Rarity, and the tread marks of blood begin to show up. The heavens open forward accepting her by shining light onto Queen Rarity and in a crimson sky and a sun being her spotlight that her society, her love, and her will has seized the important victory of the time immortalized frozen in time. Twilight slowly gallops with anon behind her back, wounded with battle scars from fighting the forces within the main fortress and stealing Anon from within the hidden depths of illusions and traps. Only the fabled Twilight is capable of such an astonishing task. The day breaks and nightfall has taken over the land...
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  37. The day begins anew revitalized anon awakes to find out the deal Queen Rarity had made, the sacrifice, the blood lust, the eternal love that can penetrate into the abstract beyond the physical realm. Twilight is the new commanding officer of the fleet, she also will become Anons bodyguard and will be unable to leave or go anywhere unless she is notified. She also has acquired her own personal little villa for the livestock, gardens, and forces for a small kingdom that is next to Queen Rarities castle. Twilight gently rubs next to Anon with her head next to his chest, tending to his wounds, while Queen Rarity has blood lust and is jealous she knows that that the debt has been paid and the lands she would have had are given back to the people and installed with rightful owners. Her life is spared, and the rivalry may begin again, Celestia has no qualms or agenda due to how the unseen hands of balance are kept true. Rarity leaves the room but warns Anon and Twilight to not fornicate otherwise she will see to it that Twilight becomes a wax doll in a museum. Both anon and Twilight laugh at the remark, as the era went into a world of burdens lifted and peace was placed like a blanket adrift over the ancient lands.
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