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- Novice Review:
- Nice plot so far, but theres some stuff i think you could improve on before ranking up!
- The overall concept is cool, but the structure is a little too messy at the moment. Clean it up and maybe try to introduce a new block somewhere to make it more interesting. The rings around the structure and floating bits are cool, but those too are a little bit messy so again, try and clean those up x3
- The organics in the plot are decent, though in the trees, there could be a higher percentage of air in your brush to make them more tree-like. Though i do like your flowers, those are cute :)
- Theres not much terrain anywhere on the plot, so maybe try and incorporate some somewhere, and if you cant, do try and make up for it with your structures and organics!
- Hope this helps!
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