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Apr 11th, 2015
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  1. Hey there! :3
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  3. So firstly, your terrain. I like it. It's simple, but you have multiple layers that work with the plot size. You have a good palette in the grass, and a nice water area at the front. You've even decorated it with some grass and flowers. Looks really good :3
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  5. Secondly, organics. I like the trees - the larger one could be a little thicker in the middle, just because it looks like it could snap. Other than look, they look pretty good :D
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  7. Lastly, your structure. The frame work is good, and the palette is well chosen, but I'm not too sure about the roof. I think stonebrick as a roof block was a bit of a strange choice - for this plot, I'd go more down a coloured clay/wool block, similar to something like this:
  8. https://imgur.com/a/Lr9Ab#0
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  10. Good luck!
  11. - Dutty :3
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