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R*Novice Review: Nathanbecker

Jun 20th, 2015
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  1. Novice Review:
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  3. Good plot so far, but theres some things you should work on before you can rank up.
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  5. Your structures are decent, though some of them lack in detailing, so try to work on that by adding stairs, slabs, fences ect to give your structures a more interesting feel to them.
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  7. Theres little to no terrain variation on your plot. At novice we expect some experimentation with terrain and different levels of it. Try to add mountains, hills, caves or whatever you want to your plot to help with the empty spaces. Also, introducing a new block to the terrain, such as clay for the grass, or cobble to the stone, gives your terrain a more interesting feel as well!
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  9. Theres not much organics to your plot besides that one tree, so try to add more trees to the plot in different sizes and variations. Adding more complex trees will show us that youre capable in organics and it will also help to break the empty space around your plot.
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  11. I hope this helps some :)
  12. Good luck!
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