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- Hello Erick098!
- My name is xDraghun and i will be reviewing your plot today. Lets start of with your structure.
- You structure has a nice block palette and matches really well with the theme of your plot, but its lacking detail and depth. try adding more blocks to it such as stairs/slabs to add detail and color to your structure.if you need reference, go to ./warp depthtutorial for further help.
- Your trees are go well with the theme and are custom made which is +1. Its a little weird how the trunks are made of brown clay thou. you have provided a good amount that fills the space effectly, and the cocoa beans add a nice touch.
- Your terrain is pretty nice but i think your could work on smoothing your arch somemore. Make it looks more natural. There is a lot of extra space next to your build. i would say based on your theme, you could add a huge pond and make the bottom/sides of it sand/sandstone. Add flowers, sugar cane, lily pads to it so it's more detailed and realistic. Sand would really go well with your build, but dont go overboard with it.
- You plot is really nice but could use some more small adjustments. Try to work with my suggestions and maybe ill see you ranking up real soon! :D
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