2014-10-30 Workshop: scary story corrections

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die - the verb
He dies. She died before. They will die. I'm dying.

dead - the adjective
A dead body... The dead man... She was dead. He will be dead.

death - the noun
His death was a surprise to everyone. She had thought about death every day since her father died.

(Death can also be about the personification, such as the Grim Reaper.)
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Ever since, thiwhenever I sleep in a new place I check the door.
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I wanted to go back to sleep or (to) leave the house.
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I moved into a new house. ("into" and "onto" - one word)
I moved out of the house. (other pairs - two words)
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She asked me, "Why are you so scared?"
She asked me why I was so scared.
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I realize that he had opened the door before I came.
1) He opened the door.
2) I came.
3) I realize this (now as I'm standing at the door).
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She wrote many poems. I don't like much poetry.
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I drank some water to quench my thirst.
(quench = satisfy thirst with water)