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- Novice Review:
- Good plot so far, but it seems a tad unfinished.
- The bridge is good and has appropriate detailing, the side towers could do without the slabspam, the terrain is good, trees are decent but theres something missing from the plot.
- Its a nice bridge as i said, but its not leading to anything or going anywhere. Perhaps adding something to the bridge to give it purpose is in your best interest.
- Also the empty space around the plot could use some filling!
- Hope this helps!
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