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- Hello there SenaidPwn, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your initiate plot...
- First off, lets just say that I had a hard time deciding whether to rank you, or to deny your plot. Sadly, I chose to deny it only because you seem like a great builder, and I believe you can do more with your plot!
- Building/Structure:
- Well, this is one of the parts I was stuck on. The walls look really great, but I have decided that your plot needs more of a structure, besides a wall surrounding the floor. It is a great design, but it can be added upon.
- Terrain/Organics:
- Instead of saplings and bone meal, try adding more your personal hand-made trees to make it unique. Also, you can use other flowers and organics, such as crops and leaves, to add to the terrain.
- Improve these and it will be a great plot!!!
- -Tayter_Kat <3
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