mao mao heroes of pure heart - Dead Cells part 4

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part 1: https://pastebin.com/FaMd80cv
part 2: https://pastebin.com/g21Mj5Tj
part 3: https://pastebin.com/nwzGicNC
https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/43955081/#43997604
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new thread, new update.

https://ghostbin.com/eBtqk

I try my best to add more to it and make it flow better like that anon said.... but it feel like I shove it in on the new stuff.
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Not bad so far, keep it up. Personally the whole "flow" of the story should come a little later when you're editing stuff, after you have most, or all, of it done. That way you have more time to sit on it, looking at the paragraphs collectively and individually, to see where some parts might dip or halt said narration.

Regardless keep it up good sir
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thank anon, I will remember that.

now time for me to sleep.
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Sleep well fren
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>Sleep well fren

i am wake
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now for the dead cell crossover
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i am now at 30% or 40% done with this, now I Just need to add the corpse eater, the corpse eater fighting and getting away. and as well the beheaded showing up.

I know I should wait until i get this done and get someone to fix my fk ups in this but I already want to do that.
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I fking did it, I am back at the part where I was.

now i can do the fking the corpse eater fight and getting away.

fk you ghostbin
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Hey congrats man, sucks that you lost the stuff but I'm glad you were able to get back to it
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thanks
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ok, here is some good news.

I add more stuff to the dead cells crossover story.

but the bad news is that I will be gone for 2 days... so I hope you like what I add so far.

it's 9:51 PM right now, holy shit.
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See you around.
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i am going to bed, night.

>>44307237
same to you.
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I AM BACK!
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ch.0 is done and up, hope you guys like it.

and as for pic related, this is what I imagine the samurai mao tombstone look like.
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re-post from last thread.
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I like it anon
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thanks pal, I am going to play some video games.
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i am wake
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good morning sir
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i got some pancakes, what about you?
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leftover pizza bits mostly, nothing as fancy or good as pancakes
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nice, I am going to make ch.1 of the dead cells story.

I'm going to think how I will start it
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so um... I forgot that the DLC for The Queen and the Sea coming out in 13 hours.

I am going to wait on that and add it to the story but I got a name for ch.1 "the wrong man in the wrong place ".

there that.
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JxJvz6SF_X4

the DLC is out and it's giving me some ideas to work with... this will take some time.
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if anyone wants to know how the ch.1 of the dead cells crossover story going... here.

this is what I have so far
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here's an up for the story, I feel like I f-k up on the mid part of this.
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https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/45066055/#45109676
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ok, let me tell you something. I know I could have finished it way sooner but for some fking reason, out of nowhere I just got hit by the biggest mood for zombies.

I have been watching project zomboid and listing to the OST of it non-stop. wt is wrong with me... but I hope you like ch.1 of this story.
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also lore video

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zkISlimiA2U