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S Rank, Jin Vs The God Komaru (Nin& Legs Sealed away)

Jun 25th, 2019
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  1. SWOOSH! Out came from the heavens above...The man that had left the blood on their gates.
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  3. Komaru himself was..Here.
  4. Kagami, Jin having just completed his weight training, Jin felt confident with his abilities for now... But the terror, that nightmare of a day in El'Qaral still roamed within his head, like a lurking shadow... But something was off; just from within the village, Jin felt an extraordinary chakra, something wasn't right, and so he rushed to the gate to scout things out...
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  6. But, just at that moment, the sun or moonlight shined upon the face of a man he thought he would never come across again... Like the cold touh of fear , all of the agony and true tragedy within the world that keeps people awake. Like a chill of death, this fear crawled up his spine and choked Jin's will, spotting not only the man, but the blood, just as an old religious sign for danger, perhaps even a ritual mark set in place... Moments to take in, right before the disaster struck, and for poor young Jin, his disaster seemed to be nearing towards him day by day, feeling watched...
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  8. And watched he was, just as promised, "W-wha--No!" He cried in shock, taking a step back, "It's you, the man from the Desert!" Jin spoke, but wondering what he could do from here, to sound the alarms of Zexen..
  9. Komaru opened his mind as he felt a powerful source of chakra heading his way. A evil twisted smile appeared on his face as he took a few steps forward.
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  11. "I suggest you not run my dear friend..Today we shall talk...Unless you care to have a little..Brawl."
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  13. Komaru wanted to make this a interesting second greeting.
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  15. "So you were the one invading my personal buisness....I should kill you here..Perhaps I might."
  16. Kagami, Jin looking at the diety, Jin did not know what to think, but he was tracked and so he would have no choice but to face Komaru... If he truly had no other options..
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  18. "---I take it, the murders, the endless massacres, were to bring you to this world! Who are you, and why do you seek the destruction of our vill---" Jin felt as if the cat had caught his tongue, looking at Komaru, the man displayed zero fear, just standing there waiting for someone to strike, all menacingly.
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  20. Jin felt, that he needed time and much of it, to even scratch the league this diety was in, because even if he could accomplish it, would his future trianing be enough?
  21. Komaru chuckled, However what Jin didn't realize was that he was already in his trap.
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  23. The Genjutsu struck fierce as he was not able to move. Komaru then walked up to the poor boy and began playing with him..Taking out a kunai and slowly running it across his neck.
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  25. "This world was originally my world...And it forever shall be...A shame you came here all alone."
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  27. ((400 Int. >:D))
  28. Kagami, Jin /// Within the mind of Jin, he would have tried to activate his alarm, to try and call the others to the gate, Guards(NPCs) or the elites (players) whoeever he could get... BUT what he did not know was this very thing, something he had only experienced once in his combat battles, but barely broke out of, Genjutsu and this... This just told Jin, that the man he was dealing with, truly was a God...
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  30. Even if it were not an illusion, Jin would speak with confidence as if his plan was going to work, "Now all of Zexen knows you're here---" He realized, his hand had not even forged the proper hand seal... His body completely taken by Komaru, and Jin frozen inf ear, as if he were stuck in time, just like his targets feel when he binds them through his shadow or when he summons his gator to lay upon them... This preassure, this fear of death that was coming his way, the young Kagami could do nothing but listne to what the God had to say...
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  32. And so he, the fool believed, he ever stood a chance. "Gah!---" He feared the knife, glaring at the diety, "Y-your world?..."
  33. Komaru says, YOU FOOL!
  34. Komaru says, I can sense your chakra signatures...I know when you are lying.
  35. Kagami, Jin says, S-shit---You---This energy is divine, why can't I fight it---.
  36. Komaru began to tease the young boy, He began to laugh like a mad man as suddenly his right hand the tips of his fingers began to glow, He struck the males chest, Jin would notice a seal begin to form on his chest as well as his chakra control being completely gone...He was now nothing.
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  38. "The sage of six paths is a joke..I am the true sage of this world...I helped concieve chakra..And I can take it away."
  39. Kagami, Jin having no other choice, Jin couldn't even grit his teeth to brace himself for the incoming blow... His eyes would widen as the hands of a literal GOD would thrust themselves on into the young teens torso as he shouts, "Yamero!" The young Kagami had just lost it all, his ability to utilize Yin chakra for his shadow posession, and it would be unknown or clear that he was unable to even summon his Aligator, a beast in which he had planned to use on Komaru...
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  41. 'D-did he see through my plan from the beginning?! Does he know the ultimate ending to this story?! What am I to do----' From that moment, his thoughts forged into real words, grunting in pain and agony, the pain of a shinobi becoming what would be normal to most, "Gah! Damn you, I---I will get you, be it your strongest or weakest--*SPLAT*" He coughed up some spit from the flow of chakra still being tampered...
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  43. "What did you do to me?!" Jin spoke with a roar of anger... Had he been at the desired level of power, had he been an Aligator Shadow Sage, would he be enough for a God that could wipe him and an entire village out with a single snap?!
  44. Komaru put the kunai away, hearing his words of fear as he spit. Komaru was enjoying this a little to much.
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  46. "I took your ability to manipulate chakra away...You are nothing compared to me. And I want you to remember this. Heh..Or you can be my puppet...All you have to do is die."
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  48. Began to laugh once agian, As if he was losing his mind. He watched poor Jin try his best but it was useless. Komaru...Was at his peak.
  49. Kagami, Jin wouldn't stand for it as he would believe the Gods control over Genjutsu, but what he wouldn't believe was the fact that all chakra, like the power of the Zexen people could be simply stripped away.. It was at that moment, Jin would try to force himself to perform the proper hand signs, offering a blood ritual as a sacrifice to whom he would be attempting to call.
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  51. "I am the one who will reigh over the beast as a Sage of my generation, I refuse to believe your lies--- Kuchiyose No Jutsu!" Jin would slap his hand upon the ground, waiting for his aligator full of Fuuinjutsu scrolls he created as traps for offense to show up... But, to his fear, a nightmare becoming a reality, his Gator did not show up, and so he tried again with the same hand signs attempting to call another..
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  53. "N-no, this can't be---I'd be damned by the God's, This can't be!" He shouts, looking up at Komaru while on his knees, furious, even trying to send out his shadow possession jutsu without a single word to try and catch Komaru off guard... But nothing happened, not even a spark of chakra would emit to aid him in this... His eyes were blank from fear and denial, he couldn't have lost his jutsu, he was Jin Kagami, one of the prized Genin of Zexen, the one the High Lord was proud to give rewards and special assignments to, the shinobi selected by his own friends to lead them in the battles they've faced against the Crimson Dawn... All those victories, lead up to this point, Jin face to face with the embodiment of that very organization... He was speechless, as if the souls been ripped from him, all he could do was look at Komaru, and draw out his kunai, his very last resort.
  54. Komaru watched as the Nara tried his best to utulize his chakra..But of course nothing happened...All Komaru had to do was give it back, But that wasn't happening..He needed Jin to show the world what he was capable of.
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  56. Komaru raised a eyebrow as a Kunai was taken out. But before Jin could even utulize it..Another genjutsu came into play.
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  58. Feathers reigned from the sky, And for most out of character they knew what was happening..They knew the power this one genjutsu carried, But as for in character...It was over the second they watched that first petal drop to the floor.
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  60. "Goodnight my dear."
  61. Kagami, Jin attempting to strike, the young teen, was met with yet another merciless attack... He grunts, not knowing that he was going iinto a genjutsu... His eyes shut soft but tight, his arms laid out on the side as he fell onto his chest, now bearing the seal of this divine punishment placed onto him by the God he tried to fight... If he was not enough at his best, using his strategy, then what was? Jin had nothing but time now to think, seeing that his chakra had been stripped away, leaving him with the bare minimum to stay alive most likely...
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  63. 'Komaru... I will grow strong, but it wont be I who fights you alone... No, somehow, someway... I'll turn all of the world, in your direction---' He dreamth about his strategy to come, even if he had the High Lords ear, the enemy would only want him and his people dead... Jin was eons away right now from becoming strong or obtaining anything to help him fend off against the great God...Right now, he was what he was before the start of his journey as a shinobi, a normal human without anything special, not even his trusted Aligator, Kurogi... For now, he slept, there on the cold ground, one in which the God hadonly cursed with his presence, 'Where did he come from, where did he go? Will I ever catch up, to this divine foe?' In his soundness of mind, this line came in a poetic fashion.
  64. Komaru smirked, Watched as Jin fell into a deep sleep.
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  66. However Komaru placed his hand on the young boy to keep him from dozing off just yet. But what jin didn't expect was death itself.
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  68. The Giant White Reaper appeared before the very eyes of the man, However the price he had given him was already made, Komaru didn't have to use his soul..Not this time.
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  70. Shinobu licked his lips as he began to pull Jin's soul from his very body.
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  72. "NO! Take his legs...I want him useless."
  73. Kagami, Jin feeling as if he were in a nightmare, the young teen fell through what was an empty void of nothingness! It was all white, and he felt nothing but what were he assumed to be the gates of hells hands... It grabbed onto his legs, and what happened next was nothing Jin would expect from a dream... His legs, were ripped away, torn asunder from his body, and in his sleep, he screamed, in nothing but pure agony, "RYAAAAAHH!!!" He was unable to wake when he wanted to, in this powerful Genjutsu, unable to fight it, reaching for his soul in his dream but in reality, he was nothing more than prey to the God, there unable to do anything but twitch.
  74. Komaru began to chuckle as in a blinding light, As quick as he had appeared.
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  76. Was gone.
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  78. "Before I leave...I know you can hear me..I will be back to destroy this village...I didn't do it now because I wanted to give you a fighting chance..Tell them of my power...I am always..Watching."
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  80. POOF!
  81. Kagami, Jin being there upon the ground... Jin was still dreaming, and as he dreamed, the illusion of his enemy came into play... Komaru, taunting him even furthur, adding insult to his mortality... Jin was angry in his dreams trying to fight the diety, but when he woke up... Komaru was gone, not only that...
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  83. But so was Jin's ability to walk, his spirit had been taken away by the fiend and his reaper death seal! Jin tried to walk, "M-my legs, what did he do to my leg---" he fell onto his face, flat...Now covered in dirt like a unwanted rag tossed aside, he lifts his head, looking up... He had a very long ways to go before reaching the settlements square...
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  85. He tried, again, but it was all for nothing, because...He was still in an illusion, the dream of his and once he had reached the tower in his dream, it would only reset from the beginning... His chakra control, from Tier two went down to nothing due to the seal, and his large pool of chakra alone was virtually gone...
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  87. Kagami Jin, a wise tactitian in the arts of combat, no more was he the great ANBU or Genin he worked himself up to be... From this point on, until someone could defeat Komaru or get his legs back, he would just be a useless soldier who once was... The Former Poetic Knight.
  88. Akinishi, Roku says, Hey
  89. Kagami, Jin was unconscious, and badly beat up... Two seals were on his chest...
  90. Akinishi, Roku picks up his badly beaten comrade and begins heading to the hospital.
  91. Kagami, Jin slowly coming to his senses, waking up, looking around the room, to of seen Roku... Jin tried to get up, but as he would know from the ininite dream he just had... It would be a cruel reality, all that training, all the meditation... He could not move his legs nor could he utilize his chakra... He has not only been hit by a literal God and his Genjutsu but also his Fuuinjutsu as well, his abilities stripped away.
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  93. "Roku...Please, come here..."
  94. Akinishi, Roku says, Hm?
  95. Akinishi, Roku approaches Jin's bedside.
  96. Kagami, Jin says, Take me into... The High Lords chambers.
  97. Kagami, Jin says, I don't care if the guards try and stop us... I must warn him, everyone...
  98. Akinishi, Roku says, Are you feeling alright, Jin?
  99. Kagami, Jin says, ----I...
  100. Kagami, Jin says, I may not.. Be able, to perform my shinobi duties ever again...
  101. Akinishi, Roku says, Jin, you don't have to beat yourself up so much over one defeat. No one can defeat everyone
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