salamence's Novice Review

Hey there! :3

Firstly, I'd like to say I like the additions you've added to your plot and the things you've changed!
But in terms of your plot stuff.
Terrain; this area here:
http://i.imgur.com/0GILFZ5.png
Needs more layers - as it is now, it's way too flat. Build up some of the land at the base of it, and just generally add more layers because having it that flat looks too man made and unnatural.

Secondly, organics. Your trees look better now, however I do think the leaves are just a bit too randomly placed, and not too thought out. The trunk is still a bit too thick on the spruce tree - the addition of roots didn't help too much because of the shape of the trunk. Also, because you made it from a different log type. I would suggest making it from the same log type.

Lastly, structure.
The station structure is still pretty simple. The side walls are very flat, and could use some depth and detail. I would suggest something like this:
https://imgur.com/ONsoRxh
(Example palette ofc)
It's nice to add this to your structures, as it gives a layer of depth and makes it easier to detail. I would highly suggest this on your other building too; the destroyed house.
The train looks lovely though! I would maybe give the coal cart a more organic shape, however. Cut off the corners, and make it a more interesting shape - this would make it appear less flat too!

Good luck!
- Dutty :3