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Kyubox on my fic

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  1. And ya finished the fic huh? I'll read through it now~
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  3. Mar 21
  4. If I had to sum this up in one sentence
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  6. "I wasn't expecting that"
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  8. Kyubox Incubox
  9. At first I thought this was going to an episode 10 fic, wasn't expecting it to be post Rebellion
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  11. Mar 21
  12. Cream Stew, I heard that recently.
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  14. Kyubox Incubox
  15. I have heard that certain painkillers used for pregnancy make you act like you're drunk......
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  17. Mar 21
  18. Kyubox Incubox
  19. Did I mention I wasn't expecting this to be a pregnancy fic? I feel like I should have said that earlier
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  21. Mar 21
  22. Oh no
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  24. I wasn't expecting this either
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  26. Kyubox Incubox
  27. You've accidentally landed a critical hit, now to see if its going to be a fatal blow
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  29. Mar 21
  30. That's a good stinger at the end there, real good
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  32. As for this critical hit
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  34. Kyubox Incubox
  35. I kinda have a problem with stories where like, you raise or adopt a kid and they fall in love with you
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  37. Mar 21
  38. Its weird to me. Incest has never really been my thing.
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  40. Cousins? Eh. I guess. Siblings? That's hitting really fucking close to my limit. Parent and child? I'm noping outta there
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  42. Kyubox Incubox
  43. My personal tastes aside, its a good fic. I'm sure people will like it, so good job!
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  45. Mar 21
  46. Kyubox Incubox
  47. I just.... yeah. Good job Homura. Once again, your obsessive love is a major problem for Homura and others
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  49. Mar 21
  50. leafbladie
  51. I'm glad you liked it.
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  54. leafbladie
  55. Admittedly I thought people might be a bit squicked out by the content. Though I felt like it was a bit unavoidable, and I thought I should just try to write it as best as I could.
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  58. If ya thought squick was unavoidable, why write it to begin with...?
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  60. Kyubox Incubox
  61. Of course, if that was your intended reaction then you succeeded
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  63. Mar 22
  64. Well the idea came to me in a dream. And I wanted to try and write it as realistically as I possibly could.
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  66. leafbladie
  67. And that lead me to the rabbit hole of Homura's romantic love still being within her, but directed at her mom. Something that contributes to her tendency for self loathing.
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  70. Yeah, as squick as it was
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  72. I enjoy the feeling of going "God fucking damn it Homura"
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  74. Her obsessive love being her downfall again transcends life, death, and form
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  76. Its a marvel really
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  78. Kyubox Incubox
  79. I love it
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  81. Mar 22
  82. Madoka wanted to give her a good life so she wouldn't see this world as cruel.
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  84. But now Homura wonders what kind of world would make her love her own mom.
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  86. leafbladie
  87. The idea also came from the idea of you not being able to control what you're attracted to. While that's true, it certainly doesn't make it right.
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  90. Very true, I like it
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  92. Kyubox Incubox
  93. The fact that it squicks me out feels very appropriate
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