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- # Typo / grammar report — game build v0.2.1 (package com.game.wolf)
- # Builds checked: Android APK and Linux AppImage (identical text in both, verified per line)
- # Method: aspell (en_US), LanguageTool 6.8 (local, en-US, style rules off), proselint, regex checks, plus a manual read of all 446 unique strings
- # One issue per line. Fields separated by " | ":
- # version | builds | severity | category | text object | location in export | original (exact, as stored) | suggested fix | note
- # severity: error = clear mistake; minor = punctuation/consistency/hyphenation; note = informal usage that may be the character's voice
- # \n = line break in the text box. Each line also appears in a "text equals" condition that moves the dialogue on, so fix both copies.
- # Not flagged on purpose: dialect/slang (COMIN', HOPIN', LEMME, WANNA, OL'), interjections (HMMM, AWWW, RAAAWR), profanity.
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | error | spelling | Home_talking_text | code0.js:113314 | PHISICALLY DRAG ME | PHYSICALLY DRAG ME
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | error | spelling | Home_talking_text | code0.js:113624 | SILLY LITTLE REBELIOUS TEEN | SILLY LITTLE REBELLIOUS TEEN
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | error | spelling | Home_talking_text | code0.js:114064 | THE MOON WHICK POINT | THE MOON WHICH POINT
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | error | spelling | Home_talking_text | code0.js:114324 | UNFORTUNATELLY ALL OF THOSE | UNFORTUNATELY ALL OF THOSE
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | error | spelling | Home_talking_text | code0.js:114944 | BREAD AND MOZARELLA STICKS | BREAD AND MOZZARELLA STICKS
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | error | spelling | Home_talking_text | code0.js:115434 | I SUBCONCIOUSLY KNEW | I SUBCONSCIOUSLY KNEW
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | error | spelling | Home_talking_text | code0.js:119179 | BACK AT TI NOW | BACK AT IT NOW | transposed letters; spell checkers miss it because TI is a word
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | error | spelling | Home_talking_text | code0.js:119244 | I NEVER ATTEMTED TO SUMMON | I NEVER ATTEMPTED TO SUMMON
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | error | spelling | Home_talking_text | code0.js:119489 | WE HANGD OUT SOMETIMES | WE HUNG OUT SOMETIMES
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | error | spelling | Home_talking_text | code0.js:126885 | FOURTEEN TOUSAND TEETH | FOURTEEN THOUSAND TEETH
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | error | spelling | Home_talking_text | code0.js:126345 | THEY AR JUST VERY SMALL | THEY ARE JUST VERY SMALL
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | error | spelling | Character_talking_text | code0.js:149416 | WELCOME TO THE NEIGHBOURGOOD THEN | WELCOME TO THE NEIGHBOURHOOD THEN
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | error | spelling | Character_talking_text | code0.js:151777 | OKAY LEMME THING. | OKAY LEMME THINK. | spell checkers miss it because THING is a word
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | error | spelling | Character_talking_text | code0.js:153070 | FORWARD TO SSEIN' YOU | FORWARD TO SEEIN' YOU
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | error | spelling | Character_button_text_1 | code0.js:161017 | COMPLIMENT YOUR PHISIQUE | COMPLIMENT YOUR PHYSIQUE | player choice button
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | error | spelling | Character_talking_text | code0.js:152680 | PRETTY STRAIGHT FORWARD GUY | PRETTY STRAIGHTFORWARD GUY
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | error | grammar | Character_talking_text | code0.js:163016 | IF YOU BOYFRIEND OVER THERE | IF YOUR BOYFRIEND OVER THERE
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | error | grammar | Home_talking_text | code0.js:117599 | MORE BOOZE OF SKETCHY OLD GUYS | MORE BOOZE OR SKETCHY OLD GUYS
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | error | grammar | Home_talking_text | code0.js:117599 | CIGARETTES IN THREE IN THE MORNING | CIGARETTES AT THREE IN THE MORNING
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | error | grammar | Home_talking_text | code0.js:114129 | WORKING ON APOLLO MISSION CLAIM | WORKING ON THE APOLLO MISSIONS CLAIM
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | error | grammar | Home_talking_text | code0.js:114259 | SHOULD LEAVE DEEP HOLES.\n\nBUT THEY AREN'T!! | SHOULD LEAVE DEEP HOLES.\n\nBUT THEY DON'T!! | AREN'T doesn't fit LEAVE DEEP HOLES
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | error | grammar | Character_talking_text | code0.js:158313 | IT LOOKS LIKE DUCK! | IT LOOKS LIKE A DUCK!
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | error | grammar | Home_talking_text | code0.js:127074 | I WAS HEAVY ONLY ONE POUND | I WEIGHED ONLY ONE POUND
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | error | grammar | Home_talking_text | code0.js:115889 | FOR UNCOMFORTABLY LONG AMOUNT OF TIME | FOR AN UNCOMFORTABLY LONG AMOUNT OF TIME
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | error | grammar | Home_talking_text | code0.js:119554 | AND ON THAT PARTY | AND AT THAT PARTY
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | error | grammar | Home_talking_text | code0.js:119619 | SO HE CAN SUCK MY DICK | SO HE COULD SUCK MY DICK | tense
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | error | grammar | Home_talking_text | code0.js:119684 | HOW IT SHOULD FEEL LIKE | WHAT IT SHOULD FEEL LIKE | or: HOW IT SHOULD FEEL
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | error | grammar | Character_talking_text | code0.js:163081 | I HAVEN'T REALIZED HOW SWEATY I'VE GOT.. | I HADN'T REALIZED HOW SWEATY I'D GOTTEN... | tense, plus a 2-dot ellipsis
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | error | grammar | Home_talking_text | code0.js:184209 | I CLEANED IT LAST TWO TIMES | I CLEANED IT THE LAST TWO TIMES
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | error | grammar | Character_talking_text | code0.js:158833 | YOU MAKE ME FLUSTER A BIT | YOU FLUSTER ME A BIT | or: YOU MAKE ME A BIT FLUSTERED
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | error | grammar | Home_talking_text | code0.js:114504 | GOT ONTO A RANDOM MOVIE | GOT INTO A RANDOM MOVIE
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | error | spacing | Home_talking_text | code0.js:114129 | CLAIM THAT AFTER AN IMPACT | CLAIM THAT AFTER AN IMPACT | double space
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | error | spacing | Home_talking_text | code0.js:114324 | A COOL THEORY IN MY OPINION | A COOL THEORY IN MY OPINION | double space
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | error | spacing | Home_talking_text | code0.js:126696 | WAS INTO MEN. | WAS INTO MEN. | triple space
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | punctuation | Home_talking_text | code0.js:126345 | DID YOU KNOW THAT SNAKES ACTUALLY HAVE LEGS. | DID YOU KNOW THAT SNAKES ACTUALLY HAVE LEGS? | question ends with a period
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | punctuation | Home_talking_text | code0.js:126381 | MAKE CUBE SHAPED POOP. | MAKE CUBE-SHAPED POOP? | question ends with a period
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | punctuation | Home_talking_text | code0.js:126570 | EAR PLUGS FOR WHEN THEY CROW. | EARPLUGS FOR WHEN THEY CROW? | question ends with a period
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | punctuation | Home_talking_text | code0.js:119749 | SUCK YOUR DICK A BIT AS WELL. | SUCK YOUR DICK A BIT AS WELL? | reported question ends with a period
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | punctuation | Home_button_text_1 | code0.js:133373 | WHO'S A GOOD BOY. | WHO'S A GOOD BOY? | player choice button
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | punctuation | Home_talking_text | code0.js:187786 | SO WHAT ARE WE WAITING FOR. | SO WHAT ARE WE WAITING FOR?
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | punctuation | Home_talking_text | code0.js:187656 | BY A BUNCH OF WEREWOLVES. | BY A BUNCH OF WEREWOLVES? | rhetorical question
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | punctuation | Character_talking_text | code0.js:155098 | THANKS DUDE? | THANKS DUDE! | question mark looks unintended
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | punctuation | Marshmallow_text | code0.js:179221 | I FEEL SO COZY | I FEEL SO COZY. | only marshmallow line with no end punctuation
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | punctuation | Tween | data.js:1 | FLIRT ! | FLIRT! | space before ! (initial text in data.js)
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | punctuation | Home_talking_text | code0.js:187656 | BUT COME ON.. | BUT COME ON... | 2-dot ellipsis
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | punctuation | Home_talking_text | code0.js:184274 | DO IT THIS TIME?..\n\nPLEASE.. | DO IT THIS TIME?...\n\nPLEASE... | 2-dot ellipses
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | punctuation | Character_talking_text | code0.js:154968 | WAIT A SECOND.... | WAIT A SECOND... | inconsistent ellipsis length (used elsewhere: 3 dots)
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | punctuation | Character_talking_text | code0.js:157478 | AND... AND..... | AND... AND... | inconsistent ellipsis length
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | punctuation | Character_talking_text | code0.js:157608 | SOO.... SEE YOU HANDSOME! | SOO... SEE YOU HANDSOME! | inconsistent ellipsis length
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | punctuation | Character_talking_text | code0.js:157673 | I SAID IT AGAIN..... | I SAID IT AGAIN... | inconsistent ellipsis length
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | punctuation | Character_talking_text | code0.js:158378 | A VERY FUNKY DUCK..... | A VERY FUNKY DUCK... | inconsistent ellipsis length
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | punctuation | Character_talking_text | code0.js:158898 | OR SOMETHING ELSE.... I WOULD GLADLY.... | OR SOMETHING ELSE... I WOULD GLADLY... | inconsistent ellipsis length
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | punctuation | Marshmallow_text | code0.js:182127 | SO CLOSE..... | SO CLOSE... | inconsistent ellipsis length
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | punctuation | Home_talking_text | code0.js:184083 | BABE....\n\nCAN I ASK | BABE...\n\nCAN I ASK | inconsistent ellipsis length
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | spacing | Character_talking_text | code0.js:155748 | OH... \n\nAND THANKS | OH...\n\nAND THANKS | trailing space before line break
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | spacing | Character_talking_text | code0.js:157413 | TOGETHER...\n\n AND TAKE LONG NAPS | TOGETHER...\n\nAND TAKE LONG NAPS | leading space after line break
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | formatting | Home_talking_text | code0.js:124433 | YOU OF COURSE.\nI CAN'T | YOU OF COURSE.\n\nI CAN'T | single line break where other lines use a blank line
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | spelling | Room_text_text | code0.js:38981 | LIVINGROOM | LIVING ROOM | room label
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | spelling | Home_talking_text | code0.js:112703 | REALLY INTO VIDEOGAMES | REALLY INTO VIDEO GAMES
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | spelling | Home_talking_text | code0.js:113624 | WHEN I STARTED HIGHSCHOOL | WHEN I STARTED HIGH SCHOOL | HIGH SCHOOL is two words everywhere else in the game
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | spelling | Home_talking_text | code0.js:187309 | WHOAH! | WHOA!
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | spelling | Character_talking_text | code0.js:157088 | AHIM AHIM! | AHEM AHEM!
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | spelling | Home_talking_text | code0.js:114064 | A BIT FAR FETCHED | A BIT FAR-FETCHED
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | spelling | Home_talking_text | code0.js:115759 | REALLY EYE OPENING MOMENT | REALLY EYE-OPENING MOMENT
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | spelling | Home_talking_text | code0.js:113689 | DURING THAT GOD AWFUL PERIOD | DURING THAT GOD-AWFUL PERIOD
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | spelling | Home_talking_text | code0.js:117664 | THIS ONE MOTHER DAUGHTER DUO | THIS ONE MOTHER-DAUGHTER DUO
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | spelling | Character_talking_text | code0.js:155098 | YOU'RE A LIFE SAVER! | YOU'RE A LIFESAVER!
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | spelling | Home_talking_text | code0.js:114944 | ZIP LOCK BAGS | ZIPLOCK BAGS
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | consistency | Home_talking_text | code0.js:112451 | SEE A MOVIE IN A THEATRE | SEE A MOVIE IN A THEATER | THEATER is used in the next story; pick one spelling
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | consistency | Home_talking_text | code0.js:184083 | CAN I ASK YOU A FAVOR? | (pick US or UK) | US FAVOR/REALIZED alongside UK FAVOURITE/NEIGHBOUR/JUDGEMENT
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | placeholder | Home_button_text_3 | code0.js:112122 | PLACEHOLDER | (real button text) | Home_button_text_3 is set to PLACEHOLDER; check whether players can see it
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | minor | placeholder | Tween | data.js:1 | THIS IS A PLACEHOLDER TEXT.\nI LOVE SUCKING DICK.\nRAAAWR!!! | (real text, or empty) | initial object text in data.js; probably overwritten before display
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | note | usage | Home_talking_text | code0.js:114569 | SOME HORROR MOVIE ON ACCIDENT | SOME HORROR MOVIE BY ACCIDENT | informal; may be the character's voice
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | note | usage | Home_talking_text | code0.js:112775 | WHEN ME AND MY BROTHER WERE LITTLE | WHEN MY BROTHER AND I WERE LITTLE | informal; may be the character's voice (also: ME AND MY BROTHER WOULD LEAVE, ME AND JAMES, ME AND TWO OF MY FRIENDS)
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | note | usage | Home_talking_text | code0.js:114129 | AS IF IT WAS A HOLLOW METAL DOME | AS IF IT WERE A HOLLOW METAL DOME | subjunctive; informal WAS is common
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | note | usage | Home_talking_text | code0.js:114879 | COMPETE ON WHO COULD | COMPETE OVER WHO COULD
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | note | usage | Home_talking_text | code0.js:118479 | THE LOCAL SKIING RESORT | THE LOCAL SKI RESORT
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | note | usage | Home_talking_text | code0.js:115759 | STAYING UP IN BED THINKING WHAT IS WRONG WITH ME | LYING AWAKE IN BED WONDERING WHAT WAS WRONG WITH ME
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | note | usage | Home_talking_text | code0.js:119489 | I DIDN'T KNOW HIM MUCH | I DIDN'T KNOW HIM WELL
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | note | usage | Home_talking_text | code0.js:117859 | THE FIRST TIME THAT HAS HAPPENED | THE FIRST TIME THAT HAD HAPPENED | tense
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | note | usage | Home_talking_text | code0.js:116394 | WOULD RARELY BUY ME ONE FOR SPECIAL OCCASIONS | WOULD ONLY BUY ME ONE ON SPECIAL OCCASIONS | current wording reads as rarely, even on special occasions
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | note | usage | Home_talking_text | code0.js:209423 | NICE CONTRAST FROM THE CITY | NICE CONTRAST TO THE CITY
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | note | usage | Marshmallow_text | code0.js:180300 | IT MAYBE NEEDED SOME MORE TIME | IT COULD HAVE USED SOME MORE TIME
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | note | usage | Home_talking_text | code0.js:126822 | REDUCES RISK OF AN EARLY DEATH | REDUCES THE RISK OF AN EARLY DEATH
- 0.2.1 | apk+appimage | note | usage | Home_talking_text | code0.js:114194 | COMPARED TO MOONS OF OTHER PLANETS | COMPARED TO THE MOONS OF OTHER PLANETS
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