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  1. Hey there! :3
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  3. So terrain, looking better but still flat in a lot of areas - I like the decoration you've added with the pond, and the floating island is nice too! I think some little wheat patches would also look really nice, because of the castle theme! :p
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  5. Secondly, organics. The dragon is looking better! However, I still think you need to make the wing out of a different block type, instead of black wool with the rest of the dragon.
  6. Also, your grounded tree still needs roots! Have them extending out from the bottom, instead of like a large stump at the base. Search Plutouthere on YouTube for his tree tutorials - you could also check out his dragon tutorials whilst you're there!
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  8. Lastly, structure. Like I've mentioned, still needs a lot more detailing. The walls around the windows, and on the towers are way too simple, and flat. Stonebrick stairs/slabs/cobble walls etc. Experiment, and make it pretty! I think throwing in some colour somewhere too, maybe with some logs or something, would be a really nice addition! Another house like the one you have next to the one you have, or on the other side would be cool, so it acted like a village! :3
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  10. Good luck!
  11. - Dutty :3
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