Stage:
	Enemies are a bit too durable for my tastes, but reasonable. (8/10)

Midboss:
- Dialogue:
	6 and 2/3 seconds of unskippable text that does not make sense at all. This doesn't give Shinki enough of an excuse to just appear. (3/10 points)
- Nonspell 1:
	It'd be nice if the amulets came from something. (9/10)
- Nonspell 2:
	A bit slow. Ok. (9/10)
- Red Sea:
	Looks a lot like one of Remilia's spellcards. (8/10)
- Creation:
	Looks way too Parsee-ish. A bit simple. (7/10)

Boss:
- Dialogue:
	Ahahahahaha. (9/10)
- Nonspell 1:
	Why suddenly switch shotsheets? (7/10)
- FK Doll:
	Too simple. Streaming streaming streaming TURN AROUND streaming streaming streaming capture (7/10)
- Nonspell 2:
	Even more Sakuya-like. Great. (10/10)
- Dali's Clock:
	Looks like a combination of two of her EoSD spells. Not too original. (8/10)
- Nonspell 3:
	You're trying to make me drink Original Soup with a hole in the spoon. (6/10)
- Sharp Cage:
	And the bowl has a hole in it, too. (6/10)

94/130 (72%)