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- Novice Review:
- Hi there! Cute plot, but theres a few things i would like for you to work on before you can rank:
- The trees are cool, and their trunks more or less match the leafage.
- The terrain is too choppy and rough, so try to smooth it out a bit. Also with all the different block types in it, it might look too busy, so maybe tone it down a tad!
- The structure is too small and too plain right now, so try and add some detailing and depth in it. Also add more structure around the plot to fill all the empty space there is!
- Good luck!
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