Message to readers or potential fans

Hello all, just a little message for those who read my stuff or just so happen to stumble upon it.
Just starting out in this whole writing fanfics and what have you.
I'd like to hear some feedback, let me know what you think. I know there's bound to be mistakes in some of the stories I write. Some things I need to improve on which is why I'm doing this.

Here's some contact info should you have a suggestion or just simply want to have a chat I don't mind it one bit.
There's no need to be intimidated, I'm pretty laid back, if you have something you wish to discuss, I'm up for it.
Discord: Jchallo#4191
Email: Jchallo83@gmail.com

Good day to you.