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Riki Ch 1

Oct 20th, 2020
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  1. PAGE 2(right):
  2.  
  3. Introduction
  4.  
  5. “Hey! Riki” is my debut work, serialized in Shounen Gahousha’s “Shounen Comics” in 1989 with a chapter released every month for 9 months. Unfortunately, Shounen Comics suspended publication 9 months later, so the serialization ended as well, but this work is essentially the starting point of all the works I published afterwards, including Crows, Kiku, QP, and WORST.
  6.  
  7. The editorial department has always asked me if I ever wanted to bring back “Hey! Riki”, but I always turned them down saying “Anything but that!” The reason is because it’s extremely embarrassing bringing back such an old work of mine! And I also thought it would be kind of cool to have like a phantom series of my own or something! (laughs)
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  9. But this time, they asked, “Then how about we have someone else revive the series?” When I heard that that certain someone was my beloved apprentice Nagata Kouichi, I gave them the okay on the spot. I felt that Kouichi would’ve been able to develop the charming Riki into an even more loveable character.
  10.  
  11. I’ll be looking forward to the development of the Nagata version of Riki as well.
  12.  
  13. Takahashi Hiroshi
  14.  
  15. PAGE 2(left):
  16.  
  17. 1: (top right) Saotome Riki
  18. The second-year undefeatable fighter of Hanatsubaki High School.
  19. 2: (below 1) Tanaka Saburou
  20. Riki’s underling.
  21. 3: (below 2) Machida Ritsuko
  22. A high schooler girl that admires Riki.
  23. 4: (below 3) Miyoshi Tatsuya
  24. A second-year that Riki acknowledges as well.
  25. 5: (left of 3) Hiromoto Takuya
  26. A transfer student who was once bullied a lot.
  27. 6: (top left of page) Shiratori Genzou
  28. Riki’s rival. A second-year at Tenbou Tech.
  29.  
  30. PAGE 3(right):
  31.  
  32. Chapter 1 - Hanatsubaki High School Second Year Class F, Saotome Riki!
  33. Chapter 2 - The Greatest Mistake of a Lifetime
  34. Chapter 3 - The Conspiracy of the Izawa Corps
  35. Chapter 4 - Riki Blows Up!!
  36. Chapter 5 - Declaration of War
  37. Chapter 6 - Aniki
  38.  
  39. PAGE 3(left):
  40.  
  41. Chapter 1 - Hanatsubaki High School Second Year Class F, Saotome Riki!
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  43. PAGE 4(right):
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  45. 1: Shiratoriiii! Where do you think you’re going?!
  46. 2: How long are you planning on pulling that disgraceful shit!
  47. 3: And you call yourself a yakuza?!
  48.  
  49. PAGE 4(left):
  50.  
  51. 1: Who gives a fuck about that dumb code of honor bullshit!!
  52. 2: W-What’d you say...?!
  53. 3: Get out of the way, Sabu!
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  55. PAGE 5(right):
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  57. 1: Hehehe... It’s over for you now, Shiratori! Prepare yourself!!
  58. 2: That’s right, Shiratori! You’re not getting out of here alive!
  59. 3: Give it up, Genzou!!
  60. 4: Knock him down with one hit, Aniki! One hit!
  61. 5: Idiot.
  62.  
  63. PAGE 5(left):
  64.  
  65. 1: T-That definitely was one hit...
  66. 2: I-I’ll be calling you Master Shiratori from now on!!
  67. 3: Heh... Very well!
  68. 4: S-Sabu... D-Damn...
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  70. PAGE 6(right):
  71.  
  72. 1: Damn youuuuu!
  73. 2: .......It was a dream, huh...
  74. 3: I see... It was ‘cause of the video I watched yesterday...
  75. 4: That damn Sabu just had to show me two yakuza movies back to back...
  76. 5: Hmm?
  77.  
  78. PAGE 6(left):
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  80. 1: Good morning, Mikitty <3
  81. 2: You’re the only one who’ll always smile for me...
  82. 3: Mom says that you’re going to be late for school if you don’t hurry up and eat breakfast!
  83. 4: Damn it, Sachiko!! How many times have I told you to knock before entering your big brother’s room?!
  84. 5: Hey, listen to me, Sachiko!
  85. 6: Hahaha, you were making a funny face!
  86.  
  87. PAGE 7(right);
  88.  
  89. 1: Hehehe... Easy pickings... I even surprise myself at how good I am at this!!
  90. 2: Would ya look at that!! He had 52000 yen in here! How lucky!!
  91. 3: I better get rid of this as soon as I can. Gotta get rid of the evidence, y’know?
  92. 4: Hmm?
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  94. PAGE 7(left):
  95.  
  96. 1: ...That kid’s got a pretty mature-looking face...
  97. 2: ...Oh, I know!!
  98. 3: Hey kid, could I bother you for a moment?
  99. 4: Hmm?
  100. 5: I was about to throw this away since I don’t need it anymore, but I thought I’d give it to you.
  101. 6: It’s even got some small change left in it. Just think of it as a “lucky wallet”.
  102. 7: Huh? No way, really?!
  103. 8: Awesome!!
  104. 9: Man, thanks a lot, old man!! I mean, mister!!
  105. 10: You don’t have to get that happy over it, hahaha...
  106. 11: Man, I was kinda in a bad mood today ‘cause I had a weird dream,
  107. 12: but I’m actually pretty lucky today, huh?
  108. 13: Ahh!! My wallet’s gone!!
  109.  
  110. PAGE 8(right);
  111.  
  112. 1: What? You sure you didn’t just forget it?
  113. 2: N-No way, I had it with me just a moment ago!!
  114. 3: Hmm?
  115. 4: Ahh!! That’s my wallet!! Y-You little...
  116. 5: D-Damn thief!!
  117. 6: Just when did he manage to grab it?!
  118. 7: (left of 6) Wha?! It’s empty! Give me my money back!
  119. 8: (bottom left of 6) Call the police!!
  120. 9: There was at least 50000 yen in there, you brat!!
  121.  
  122. PAGE 8(left):
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  124. 1: Hey, you’re from Hanatsubaki High School, aren’t you?!
  125. 2: W-Whoa, hold on now...
  126. 3: Give me back my money, damn it!
  127. 4: All the kids from there are never up to any good!! You little delinquent!!
  128. 5: Wait...
  129. 6: Hey, give me back my 50000 yen! That’s 50000 yen I’m missing!
  130. 7: Don’t gimme that attitude!!
  131. 8: Hey, I want my money back!!
  132. 9: I’ll call the police on you, damn it!!
  133. 10: 50000 yen! 50000 yen!! 50000 yen!!
  134. 11: Would you just shut the fuck up already?!
  135. 12: I’ve had enough of this! You’ve pissed me off! I’m gonna kick your asses!
  136. 13: Ahh!!
  137. 14: W-Whoa... H-Hey, somebody help!!
  138. 15: I ain’t letting you get away, idiot!!
  139. 16: H-Help meeeee!
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  141. PAGE 9(right):
  142.  
  143. 1: (sign) Yamada Police Station
  144. 2: That damn swindler... I’m gonna murder him the next time I see him!
  145. 3: And what’s with the officer just leaving me here on my own?
  146. 4: I might just run away, you know?
  147. 5: Hmm?
  148. 6: Would you look at this, a government worker is smoking of all things!
  149. 7: I suppose I’d better confiscate this <3
  150.  
  151. PAGE 9(left):
  152.  
  153. 1: What do you think you’re doing, you dolt!!
  154. 2: Ow!!
  155. 3: Didn’t I tell you to just sit still and wait?!
  156. 4: Owww...
  157. 5: Wait!! D-Don’t tell me you’re the one who framed me!
  158. 6: What the heck are you talking about?!
  159.  
  160. PAGE 10(right):
  161.  
  162. Saotome Riki(17)
  163.  
  164. Hanatsubaki High School Second Year Class F.
  165. A troublemaker who’s well known for his antics even amongst the rest of the infamous Hanatsubaki’s students. It appears that he wasn’t responsible for the pickpocket incident, but he still reacted violently towards innocent civilians. The citizens have often complained about the students of Hanatsubaki, meaning that he’ll likely be put under further scrutiny from now on. After contacting the school, it’s been decided that he’ll be suspended for 5 days.
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  167. PAGE 10(left):
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  169. 1: Hanatsubaki High School. 4 or 5 years ago it was a co-ed school, but the number of female students continued to decline year after year, with it now being almost no different from an all-boys school.
  170. 2: With the school full of boys now, it’s turned into quite the delinquent school.
  171. 3: This school is surrounded by abnormally tall walls.
  172. 4: With the school letting off such a bizarre and off putting aura, there’s hardly anyone willing to approach it these days.
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  174. PAGE 11(right):
  175.  
  176. 1: It’s been 4 days since Riki was suspended...
  177. 2: Ahh, damn it!
  178. 3: I can’t even freakin’ get a Kasu!
  179. 4: I lost again!
  180. 5: You suck at this! Lemme take over!
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  182. PAGE 11(left):
  183.  
  184. 1: W-Whoa...!! Is that for real?! Is that even allowed?!
  185. 2: Hmm... Just one more day until Aniki comes back!!
  186. 3: As his underling, I need to hold the fort until he gets back...
  187. 4: We can’t afford to let our guards down for the rest of the day! I need to raise everyone’s spirits!
  188. 5: (blackboard) 1 more day until our Aniki Saotome’s back
  189. 6: Let’s do this!
  190. 7: All right everyone, listen up!
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  192. PAGE 12(right):
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  194. 1: (test at subu’s feet in panel 2) Tenbou Tech’s going down!!
  195. 2: Um, a-anyway, I have something to tell you all as Aniki Saotome’s representative!
  196. 3: Listen up!! As you can see, there’s only one more day until Aniki’s back!! But there’s a lot we gotta do while he’s not here!!
  197. 4: Those pricks at Tenbou could be planning on making a move on us at any moment!!
  198.  
  199. PAGE 12(left):
  200.  
  201. 1: We can’t let our guards down for the rest of today! We can’t let them beat us!
  202. 2: We gotta show those Tenbou assholes hell!
  203. 3: Idiot, you really think any of them could take us out?
  204. 4: If anything, you’d be the guy that’d get taken out, Sabu!!
  205. 5: More importantly, what’s with the way you’ve been acting? You ain’t part of no gang or something.
  206. 6: Hahah, you’ve been watching too many yakuza movies, dude!!
  207. 7: W-What are you talking about?! Shut up!!
  208. 8: What’d you say, smart guy?!
  209. 9: Sorry!! I overstepped my bounds!
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  211. PAGE 13(right):
  212.  
  213. 1: Don’t worry, Sabu. Those Tenbou bastards got nothing on us.
  214. 2: Yeah, that’s right!!
  215. 3: Who the hell do you think we are?!
  216. 4: Sabu... You better watch yourself...
  217. 5: D-Don’t be silly!! You don’t have to worry about me at all, hahahaha!!
  218. 6: I’ll drive them off the moment they show up, you’ll see!! Haha... hahahaha...!!
  219.  
  220. PAGE 13(left):
  221.  
  222. 1: No one from Tenbou’s here, right? Right...?! Right...? Right...
  223. 2: Run!!
  224. 3: A-Aniki...
  225. 4: Hurry up and come back alreadyyyy!
  226.  
  227. PAGE 14(right):
  228.  
  229. 1: Tenbou Technical High School. They’ve garnered just as much of a reputation as Hanatsubaki over the past 2, 3 years.
  230. 2: They’re a delinquent school that’s broken out in fights with Hanatsubaki multiple times now.
  231. 3: C’mon, Gen-chan!! Come with us!!
  232. 4: Back off already, would you...
  233. 5: Please, Gen-chan!
  234. 6: Shiratori Genzou(Second Year)
  235. A big shot at Tenbou Tech, a lone wolf, and Riki’s greatest rival.
  236. 7: He might look strong but he really is strong!! But he’s not exactly good with his 8’s when it comes to multiplication...
  237.  
  238. PAGE 14(left):
  239.  
  240. 1: C’mon, please!! Let’s beat up those Hanatsubaki idiots while that insanely strong Riki’s not there to help them!!
  241. 2: I hate doing underhanded things like that!
  242. 3: You can just stand in the back and watch us!
  243. 4: I already told you I’m not going!
  244. 5: Pleaseeee, Gen-chan!!
  245. 6: Okay, what about this? How ‘bout we treat you to some barbeque, then?
  246. 7: Barbeque?!
  247. 8: Yeah!! We’ll let you eat as much as you want!!
  248. 9: All right, it’s a deal. I’m only going to be watching, just so you know.
  249. 10: Y-Yeah, that’s more than enough for us.
  250. 11: Fufufu... Idiots!! I’ll eat ‘til I puke!!
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  252. PAGE 15(right):
  253.  
  254. 1: *yaaaaawn*
  255. 2: Phew... I know I’m suspended and all, but being stuck at home all day for so long is gonna make me go crazy!!
  256. 3: They want me to reflect on what I’ve done, but what am I even supposed to reflect on, geez...
  257. 4: Sorry, could you get that ball for us?
  258. 5: Y-Yeah! Hold on real quick!!
  259. 6: Nice, maybe I can get them to have me join them!!
  260.  
  261. PAGE 15(left):
  262.  
  263. 1: Let’s see... I’m pretty sure it rolled over here, but...
  264. 2: Hmm?
  265.  
  266. PAGE 16(right):
  267.  
  268. 1: K-Kyaaaah! W-Who is this person?!
  269. 2: Kyaaah!! I-It’s a pervert! Someone help!!
  270. 3: H-Hurry up and call someone!!
  271. 4: You pervert!!
  272. 5: Wait, that’s not it...
  273. 6: Look at his weird face!
  274. 7: C’mon... that’s going a little too far, don’t you think...? I was just grabbing this ball, really...
  275.  
  276. PAGE 16(left):
  277.  
  278. 1: It’s not what they think! Please, God! You saw me, right?!
  279. 2: Tell me you’re on my side at least, damn it!!
  280.  
  281. PAGE 17(right):
  282.  
  283. 1: ...Aniki’s probably bored out of his mind right now, huh?
  284. 2: Oh, I know!!
  285. 3: I’ll bring him some videos!
  286. 4: This stuff is the best for when you’re bored!
  287. 5: Hehe... Which one should I bring... He already saw the “Battles Without Honor and Humility” series, so...
  288. 6: ...Wait!!
  289. 7: It’d be real bad if I ran into someone from Tenbou while outside...
  290. 8: Hmm...
  291.  
  292. PAGE 17(left):
  293.  
  294. 1: O-Oh, yeah! I just gotta disguise myself!!
  295. 2: Man I’m a genius!!
  296. 3: I-It’s perfect!!
  297. 4: No one would guess I’m Tanaka Saburou now!
  298. 5: (on bandana) Tanaka Liquor Store
  299. 6: Just hold on, Aniki!!
  300. 7: Your brain’s something you gotta use while you still can!! Mom, I’m gonna be heading out for a bit!!
  301.  
  302. PAGE 18(right):
  303.  
  304. 1: ...Hey!!
  305. 2: Tanaka Saburou-kun!!
  306. 3: N-No way!!
  307. 4: H-How?!
  308. 5: Are you an idiot?! You stick out like a sore thumb! Plus your bandana has “Tanaka Liquor Store” written right on it!!
  309. 6: Ah!! I-I screwed up!!
  310. 7: Urgh...!! Shiratori Genzou...!!
  311. 8: Hehehe... Hey, Sabu!! Come with us real quick!!
  312.  
  313. PAGE 18(left):
  314.  
  315. 1: Whoa! Ow!
  316. 2: T-That hurt...!! Calm down, guys! Violence is never the answer!
  317. 3: C’mon, where’d all that energy of yours go off to?!
  318. 4: W-What are you talking about?!
  319.  
  320. PAGE 19(right):
  321.  
  322. 1: What’s this you got here, huh?
  323. 2: Ah!! Hey!! Don’t touch that! It’ll explode on you!!
  324. 3: Oh, it’s just a video.
  325. 4: “Account of the Ando Gang - The Assassin Underling”? What the heck is this?!
  326. 5: Ahhh!
  327. 6: I was gonna show that to Aniki!! Hey!! Give it back!
  328. 7: What?!
  329. 8: So you were on your way to Riki’s place, huh? That’s perfect.
  330. 9: Oww!!
  331.  
  332. PAGE 19(left):
  333.  
  334. 1: Listen up! Tell this to that bastard Riki!! If he keeps walking around like a big shot...
  335. 2: Tenbou’s not gonna just sit still and stay quiet about it!!
  336. 3: That hurts, damn it! What are you talking about?! You guys don’t have any chance of taking down Aniki!!
  337. 4: You can come at him by the dozens if you want, but you’ll never win!!
  338. 5: What’d you say?!
  339. 6: Didn’t I tell you violence isn’t the answer?!
  340. 7: (sfx left of 5) creak...
  341. 8: Hmm?
  342. 9: W-What the... Yo, someone’s here!!
  343.  
  344. PAGE 20(right):
  345.  
  346. 1: Uwaah!!
  347. 2: Owww...
  348. 3: W-What the hell just happened?!
  349. 4: Eek!!
  350.  
  351. PAGE 20(left):
  352.  
  353. 1: R-Riki!!
  354. 2: A-Aniki...
  355.  
  356. PAGE 21(right):
  357.  
  358. 1: O-Officer, hurry! Over here! The idiot school and the half wit school are fighting each other!!
  359. 2: T-They’re at that park!!
  360. 3: I’m on it!!
  361. 4: S-Shit, the cops!!
  362. 5: I’ve got nothing to do with this...
  363.  
  364. PAGE 21(left):
  365.  
  366. 1: Uwaah!!
  367. 2: Look, there they are!!
  368. 3: I-I see them!!
  369. 4: Know your damn places or else you’ll get your asses beaten!!
  370. 5: Owww...
  371. 6: W-What’s with this guy... It’s like he suddenly turned into a different person...
  372. 7: Wait, why isn’t Gen-chan here...?
  373.  
  374. PAGE 22(right):
  375.  
  376. 1: Hey, you kids!! What are you doing over there?!
  377. 2: S-Shit, it’s the cops!! C’mon, let’s get outta here!!
  378. 3: Damn it! We’ll remember this!
  379. 4: Don’t give me that “we’ll remember this” bullshit!! We’ll kick your asses no matter when you come at us!!
  380. 5: Hey, you two! What were you doing here?!
  381. 6: Oh, good evening, officer! What can I do for you?
  382. 7: Hmm?
  383. 8: Y-You again!! Saotome!!
  384. 9: Hey, that’s my line.
  385.  
  386. PAGE 22(left):
  387.  
  388. 1: Why are you guys always up to no good?!
  389. 2: What, you got a problem with us taking a shit in the bathroom?
  390. 3: So you’re telling me 4, 5 guys were taking a shit all at the same time?! Yeah, right!
  391. 4: Hmm?
  392. 5: Ahh!!
  393. 6: Hmm?!
  394. 7: Y-You’re that moustached swindler bastard!!
  395. 8: Don’t think I don’t see you!
  396. 9: H-Hey, officer! That’s the guy!! That’s the guy that stole that wallet!!
  397. 10: W-What, really?!
  398. 11: N-Not good...
  399.  
  400. PAGE 23(right):
  401.  
  402. 1: What do you mean by “Really?” Hurry up and arrest him, idiot!!
  403. 2: A-Aniki! The bastard’s getting away!
  404. 3: Wait! Stop running, you little shit!
  405. 4: Ahh! Damn it!!
  406. 5: You damn swindler...
  407. 6: You’re not getting away...
  408. 7: this time!!
  409.  
  410. PAGE 23(left):
  411.  
  412. 1: Hey! Stop right there, prick!!
  413.  
  414. PAGE 24(right):
  415.  
  416. 1: Now you understand, right?!
  417. 2: You guys keep saying things like how we’re a shitty school or a dumb school, but don’t underestimate Hanatsubaki!
  418. 3: I mean, we’ve got a bunch of peeps who can’t do their multiplication tables, sure. And we got punks who drink, smoke, start fights, shoplift... all kinds of messed up shit!! But I bet you feel stupid seeing us now, huh?!
  419. 4: But... But still..
  420.  
  421. PAGE 24(left):
  422.  
  423. 1: A-Aniki...
  424. 2: ......
  425. 3: It’s no good, I just can’t say it right!
  426. 4: All right, I’m coming back starting tomorrow!! Get hyped, Sabu!!
  427. 5: Yeah!! You know it, Aniki!!
  428. 6: Heh... “I bet you feel stupid seeing us now”, huh?
  429. 7: H-He threw that bicycle almost 30m away...
  430. 8: That’s not something a human is capable of! He’s an alien!!
  431. 9: I’ll protect this country!! I swear I’ll put a stop to him!!
  432. 10: Just you wait, Riki!!
  433.  
  434. PAGE 25(right):
  435.  
  436. 1: Aniki, I’m telling you, Bunta’s acting is just superb in these! You’ll love him!
  437. 2: Hehehe, rejoice, Aniki!! I brought three movies with me this time! Let’s watch them all!!
  438. 3: T-Three...?!
  439. 4: Chapter 1 - END
  440.  
  441. PAGE 25(left):
  442.  
  443. 1: Takuya! It’s your first day, so you better introduce yourself to everyone!
  444. 2: I know!! I’m heading off, now!!
  445. 3: Hanatsubaki HIgh School, huh...?
  446. 4: Judging from the name, it sounds like a really bright and cheerful school...
  447. 5: There’s probably not a single delinquent there!!
  448. 6: I’ll forget about the past and get reborn!!
  449. 7: Chapter 2
  450.  
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