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- Novice Review:
- Good plot so far, but i needs a bit of work before you can rank up!
- Your terrain is nice, but try to add more levels of terrain to the plot. Make it more dynamic :) Also, you might want to add the terrain palette to the floating islands.
- Your structure is decent, but it doesnt have a lot of depth in it. Try to add layer to the build to give it depth and a sense of deepness to it. Additionally, you might want to add more structures around the plot, that arent incorporated in the terrain :p
- Your organics are okay, but theyre a little choppy. Try to smooth the trunk of the tree out, and use a higher percentage or air in your brush when doing the leaves. It is probably best if you add more organics to the plot!
- Looking great though! Good luck!
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