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- 19:46 coolkid: yo no idea how much time you got but
- 19:46 *coolkid is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/2211593#/4685001 Ne Obliviscaris - Painters of the Tempest (Part II): Triptych Lux [Canvas of Kings]]
- 19:46 coolkid: check this out when you can get some
- 19:47 Greaper: yo
- 19:47 Greaper: 16 minutes
- 19:47 Greaper: :skull:
- 19:47 Greaper: what you want me to check?
- 19:47 coolkid: emphasis
- 19:47 Greaper: any specific parts?
- 19:47 Greaper: or just in general?
- 19:48 coolkid: id say general
- 19:48 coolkid: i wanna know if it all flows into one another properly in your eyes
- 19:48 coolkid: since song picks up > slows down > picks up > slows down a lot
- 19:49 Greaper: might be taste but 00:27:330 (1) - sliders like this I always find so awkward especially with the slider tick at 00:27:609 -
- 19:52 Greaper: 00:43:585 (6,7) - would've expected a hyper on this?
- 19:52 coolkid: i think if i rework around this section more and space out the streams this should play better
- 19:53 Greaper: 01:00:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing increase feels too big for how tense the cymbals eventually become?
- 19:53 Greaper: at least I didn't expect it to be this big
- 19:54 coolkid: can reduce 4/5 but
- 19:54 coolkid: the cymbals def get louder here
- 19:54 coolkid: sounds like a massive rain shower
- 19:54 coolkid: lol
- 19:55 Greaper: sure
- 19:55 Greaper: 01:32:074 - feels a bit on the easier side somehow? The song is going crazy here so I expected a bit more tbh
- 19:56 Greaper: like from that timestamp until the end of the kiai
- 19:56 coolkid: perhaps the long holds
- 19:56 coolkid: i did that for the sake of string but i can chop it up into spacer streams rather then long flow
- 19:56 Greaper: mmh
- 19:56 Greaper: ye that might work
- 19:58 Greaper: 01:48:539 (5,1) - would make this just 3 circles with simple dashes. So you can focus on 01:48:958 (2) - instead. As it would probably play nicer
- 19:58 Greaper: 01:54:817 - seems weird to skip when the pitch is this strong?
- 19:59 Greaper: 02:07:655 (13,1) - would buff this, guitars kicking in but hyper strength is the same?
- 19:59 Greaper: also even has a cymbal backing it
- 19:59 coolkid: fixd all
- 20:01 Greaper: not sure how it would play but maybe 02:33:050 (6) - as a circle instead?
- 20:01 Greaper: so you focus on the guitar instead of background drums?
- 20:01 Greaper: yeeeeeeeee
- 20:01 Greaper: that probably could work
- 20:01 Greaper: but patterns def needs some adjustments if you do so
- 20:03 coolkid: adjusted
- 20:04 Greaper: 05:08:182 (2) - you sure about those stacks?
- 20:05 Greaper: 05:08:321 - no emphasis for the snare is kinda meh
- 20:05 Greaper: 05:09:299 (2) - same for this
- 20:05 coolkid: oh damn
- 20:05 coolkid: oversight
- 20:05 Greaper: I guess the pattern itself is fine to leave as is
- 20:05 Greaper: it plays fine
- 20:06 coolkid: i did this for the sake of variation with this 05:08:182 (2) - and 05:08:182 (2) -
- 20:06 coolkid: 02:54:957 (1) - ***
- 20:06 Greaper: (you linked the same)
- 20:06 Greaper: lol
- 20:06 Greaper: ye
- 20:06 coolkid: lol
- 20:07 Greaper: the pattern plays fine
- 20:07 Greaper: so up to you if you want to change it
- 20:08 coolkid: wont change then
- 20:08 Greaper: 05:42:089 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - was this the intention?
- 20:09 Greaper: because I'm now unsure what this tries to follow
- 20:09 Greaper: I guess also including 05:41:949 (9) -
- 20:09 coolkid: prob just oversight
- 20:10 coolkid: was hard for me to overhear any instruments over this long loud scream
- 20:10 Greaper: 05:50:182 (1,2) - antiflow maybe? might make it too hard for what you wanted to do here? but now they played a bit too easy to my liking
- 20:14 coolkid: ok
- 20:15 coolkid: i guess it helps for pattern variation
- 20:16 coolkid: and a way to seperate two vocalists > one vocalist transition
- 20:16 Greaper: oh true
- 20:16 Greaper: it was mostly just me thinking about the guitar
- 20:16 Greaper: and for consistency with 05:51:856 (1,2) -
- 20:18 coolkid: yeah did that one earlier too
- 20:20 Greaper: 08:04:928 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - idk what this all tried to follow. Maybe follow the vocal layer here as the vocals are so much the focus point of this?
- 20:21 Greaper: and other way probably focus more on the guitar?
- 20:21 Greaper: if thats even possible
- 20:21 Greaper: like 08:07:110 (7) - change this so you map 08:07:292 -
- 20:23 coolkid: only way i can explain the 08:04:928 - bit is it's following the higher pitches of his vocal blended in with the clock ticking sound which i used a 1/16 for
- 20:23 coolkid: it it's emphasis overkill i can do a simple reduction to 1/4 to give light to the other sections with 1/8 / 1/16
- 20:23 Greaper: 10:01:105 (4,5) - nice edge dash
- 20:24 Greaper: mmh
- 20:24 Greaper: tbh I can't hear what you are hearing then
- 20:24 coolkid: oh yeah quality starts to rapidly degenerate here lol
- 20:24 Greaper: as I would personally just full focus on vocals
- 20:24 Greaper: oh no
- 20:24 coolkid: what part can you not hear
- 20:24 coolkid: the clock tick?
- 20:24 Greaper: the 8 min one
- 20:24 Greaper: ye
- 20:25 coolkid: wait rlly?
- 20:26 Greaper: 10:09:046 - mmh ye guitar solo feels way too easy maybe?
- 20:27 Greaper: maybe because of the density gaps?
- 20:28 Greaper: 10:23:693 (4,5) - feels weak for the strength of the finish
- 20:28 Greaper: if you change this then apply the same here 10:26:517 (4,5) -
- 20:29 Greaper: 10:29:870 - could map 1/6 here
- 20:29 Greaper: 10:30:311 - would also map this 1/4
- 20:30 Greaper: feels so empty when there is a guitar solo kind of thing
- 20:31 Greaper: 10:54:929 (1) - maybe better to end it on 10:58:811 - ?
- 20:31 Greaper: right now the break starts out of nowhere
- 20:32 Greaper: 11:12:634 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1) - probably should use more of the screen here
- 20:32 Greaper: feels super cramped for no reason
- 20:33 Greaper: or at least focused too much in the middle
- 20:34 coolkid: i like the 1/6 idea
- 20:34 coolkid: will do
- 20:34 coolkid: fixed strength
- 20:34 Greaper: 11:51:034 (1) - timing sucks :)
- 20:34 coolkid: guitar solo is easy yeah lol
- 20:34 Greaper: or something is cursed here at least
- 20:34 coolkid: could end on 1/8
- 20:35 Greaper: mmh
- 20:35 Greaper: snapping would suck though
- 20:35 coolkid: hm ur right
- 20:35 coolkid: i think its 10 ms off
- 20:35 Greaper: 11:51:491 - 1/7 maybe?
- 20:35 Greaper: at least that sounds correct to me
- 20:36 coolkid: 1/7 ye
- 20:37 Greaper: 12:03:834 (1,2) - reduce to 1.3?
- 20:37 Greaper: tbh maybe just using 1.2x might be better here for your 1/2's
- 20:37 Greaper: because this could easily become the "random miss" section
- 20:37 Greaper: XD
- 20:38 coolkid: yeah this entire section needs a rework\
- 20:38 coolkid: same with the storms of ages deathslider part
- 20:38 coolkid: lol
- 20:39 Greaper: ye probably
- 20:39 Greaper: 12:27:301 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - like this feels like a missed oppertunity to increase spacings or introduce some more hypers?
- 20:39 coolkid: yes
- 20:39 Greaper: but I guess you want to stay calm for the section before that
- 20:39 Greaper: mmh
- 20:39 coolkid: i tried it before but it played kinda shit lolol
- 20:40 coolkid: i have an idea for that
- 20:41 coolkid: ill just cut off fom death wiggle and make an increased spacing illness lilin pattern
- 20:41 coolkid: not to give you nom ptsd
- 20:42 Greaper: nah illness was fine
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