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EliteXplosion's Novice Review

Jul 3rd, 2015
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  1. Hey there! :3
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  3. Firstly, your terrain. You have a really nice and original palette for your terrain, and the shape is cool! :o
  4. Nothing bad to say about it really. You've decorated it well too, without the use of grass/flowers etc.
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  6. Secondly, organics. I really like your trees. The blocks in the leaves looks so pretty with the mushroom block trunks. I get a really large fantasy feeling from this plot, it's really nice! However, I think your branches are a little too thick. Thin them out a little, then they'll look lovely. It might be easier to remove the leaves first to do this, and then replace them back again!
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  8. Lastly, structure. The structure at the top of the plot is really lovely! Great detailing and nice palette choice; the blocks suit eachother well. The other structures are also very nice, but the roofs have too much 'slab spam'. By this, I mean you've covered the roof in slabs, in not too much of a creative way. It usually looks nicer to keep the roof all one block type, sometimes maybe with the addition of cobblestone walls/fences etc. In this case, I'd make them a different block type to the mushroom block, just for contrast, and I'd take away the slabs.
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  10. Lovely looking plot overall though!
  11. Good luck!
  12. - Dutty :3
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