2015-03-23 Workshop: food writing corrections

Greg Malivuk
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then = after that (transition word)

than = for comparisons (I am better than everyone.)

First time I mention it: You will need an onion.
Later: Put the onion in the sauce.

We eat it on special days. (on [specific day])

We eat it at any time. (at [specific time])
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First,

Then, / After that, / Next,

Finally, / Last,  ("Finally" is for the last step in a process, it is NOT for the conclusion.)