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- Novice Review:
- Alrighty x3
- So The plot is nice as i said but theres still some things that i'd like you to work on before you rank up! :) Make the mushrooms smoother (small and big) and really give them a smooth soft curve that makes them look all nice and pretty!
- There could be more terrain levels to the plot as well so keep that in mind.
- The structures are fine but keep in mind proper detailing with slabs stairs fences etc. The hanging structures though could use more work. They look strangely unsupported so try and think of a better way to support them from the top!
- The dragon is a cute addition but remember to keep it smooth!
- Good luck!
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