Tayter_Kat

AmuletBuilds

Jul 15th, 2015
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  1. Hello there AmuletBuilds, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your initiate plot....
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  3. Organics:
  4. This is anything living, like trees and animals. Your organics are very good for a Novice, so I am not going to spend too much time on this. Great job!
  5. Terrain:
  6. This is anything involving the ground, like cliffs, hills, and craters. Your terrain is also very good, so great job!!! it is smooth and very unique.
  7. Structure:
  8. This is anything from houses to towers to bridges. I see you have a few structures on your plot, but they have very little to little depth. I suggest adding depth to them. Depth is the layers within a structure and you can add some by incorporating fences, slabs, and stairs. You can add some detail to a structure by adding buttons and trap doors to the sides. Last thing here; You really don't have a building of any kind, besides the bridge. I suggest building something at the top of your landscape because it is needed to rank up.
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  10. I wish you lots of luck<3
  11. Tayter_Kat | Octovon Mod
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  13. P.S. I really do like your terrain, you'll do great, you just need a big structure is all:)
  14. P.S.S it would be cool if you explained what is going on at the top of your build. I have no idea what it might be, but I am guessing a slim dragon... I know I am wrong. Maybe add it to the other signs!
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