Ch1 now to the outside world(unedited)

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Episode 1 now to the outside world!


"Ryua-chan what do you want to become when you grow up?"
"An Adventurer!"
"eh, its dangerous. There is a lot demons killed many humans, papa said so."
"but is more boring staying in the village you know."

I stood up from where i was sitting and threw a stone horizontally then it sank in

the river. I was thinking of doing the stepping-stones(飛び石) but i failed.
However kurinka-chan who is next to me, I didn't know if she noticed or not but she

continued speaking to me without caring about it. Her free-flowing blonde hair

was fluttering in the wind. (サラサラ sarasara not sure if got the right meaning and

usage)

"really? if thats the case I wonder if me and Ryua-chan can go together"(?)
"right now, are you saying it would be dangerous to go by myself ?"
"i guess it will be fine if i go with you."

The sunset shining upon the center of the water's surface, before dinner it was a

daily routine that we would talk with each other.(?)
after this we would return home to eat a meal and sleep on a warm bed.

The houses being dyed red.
The wooden walls making a crumbling sound as it fell apart
Even the skies began to look like it was burned because of the strong fire.
They used hoes and sickles to fight however, everyone in the village was peirced

by tragedy.(?)
I didn't see any monsters.(?)
as I cried and screamed.
Father, Mother, Kurinka.
I did nothing but run to escape.
However,from the eyes of an adult and not to mention a child, an ugly monster

standed on my way.(?)
at that time when the monster was about to brandish his weapon, its arm suddenly

went flying.(?)

"Hurry!! Run!!"

A travelling swordsman that stopped by the village a shortwhile ago, save me in

the end.(?)
while i was cowering, i was urged many times to run away with a strong tone.(?)

"There is no need to worry! I will save them all!"

Now that i think about it, I think that was good way so i was determined to

escape.(?)
when i was running, at that moment i looked back and saw that spectacle.

A one winged demon and the swordsman is . . . . . .

//////

I woke up when i heard the sound of the stream.
I wiped of the tears that was on my face and, gradually i came back to reality that i

recognize.(?)
At the moment i went out of the cave, the fatigue that was sleeping in me was

released.(?)
Thanks to the item at the lowest floor, i was able to return instanly so i was not

tired. (pretty much needs editing?)
When i defeated the King of Destruction, at the interior there was a treasure box

with an unusuall ribbon inside it.(?)
That scary person, thinking that person protected this thing is somehow makes

me laugh.(?)
who knows what kind of effect it has but, for now i don't understand it at all.(?)

"was it today the time to finally depart?"(?)

it is very hard for a human to reach the dungeon area which is surrounded by

many tall mountaind and also has 100 underground floors.(?)
to not likely approach it, at that place i felt a mysterious-like atmosphere.(?)
I wonder how i was able to bear going to such place when i was a child, the more i

think about it the less i understand.(?)

"first of all i have to go out of this place, lets do it"(?)

I started with a light excercise by running past the trees.
on the way i jumped trough a cliff, instead of the slope i earnestly run forward.(?)
at that moment, something black jumped out inside of the bushes.(?)

【Hellbear appeared!】( its says ヘルベアー  which is Herubea used herbia as a temp

name seriously i thought it was herbia)

As it though, there are monsters at the outstide world.(?)
Buts its not scary at all,  such thing is is probably around  10th floor  that i already

fought throught.(?)

【Hellbear waved its big arm!】

I stopped it with one hand. At this level a weapon is not necessary.
as it is my left hand form a fist, I expressed my symphathy to the bear monster.(?)

【Ryua attacked! Herbia recieved 3022 damage!】

【Herbia HP 0/1430】

The bear noisly fell from where it stood.(?)
Still i wonder if it was a weak monster.(?)

【Hellbear was defeated!】
【Ryua recieved 2096 experience!】

"I'm in a good condition. . . .  i think?" (? kinda confusing 快調……かな？)

I tried cracking my fingers and my chin. (? OTL i think she did an action like this

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w and moved here head left and right)
after this lets go somewhere, anyhow lets try searching for a place where people

lives.(?)
For now I need to cross over this mountain(?)
along the way, no matter how many monsters attacked I ignored them and ran

away.
while there are some that came to chase after me, no one was able to catch up

with my pace.(?)

"I wonder if became stronger since the monsters in this area is not a big deal, i

wonder which way to go?."

I've been running continously for 2 hours.
to cross over the mountain, Before i passed over the the forest under the cliff was

a wide grasslands, and then a town.(?)
i was soaked in a  pleasant breeze blowing towards me, It was like i was being

blessed by it.(?)
I ran down the cliff at once, I can see a town in sight.(?)
What should i do first when i arrive at the town?.
First of all i should return to the village.
I don't even want to remember the what happened but, I want to make a grave for

father and mother.
and if possible, it would be good if there are any clues regarding the one-winged

demon.

The town has houses made of brick in a line, it was more developed than the

village where i lived.(?)
An old woman carrying fruits over her head, a man and a woman having an

enjoyable chat while walking.(?)
a old guy carry a really massive axe and a an old man with a walking stick.(? oji-

san and ojii-san . . . . . . old guy and old man . . .lol?  OTL)
Its overflowing with many many people.
I haven't seen such spectacle.(? seriously needs editing)
Now that i have grown, I didn't know what i should and i was puzzled.(?wtf)
because its been a long time i have talked, I don't know how what to say.(?wtf)
when i was being flustered, someone bumped against my back.(?. . . .)

"you'll be a hindrance if you just stand there, out of the way"(? TT_TT this part is

confusing)
"eh. . .ah . . .  so -sorry"(? which is better sorry or excuse me?)

for a very long time that i haven't talked its nothing but  miserable.(? seriously

needs editing)
however no matter how long i wait i won't reach a conclusion(? i better find an

editor soon)
I gave up thinking and tried asking the person walking by about the location of the

village(?)

"um, do you know which way is the ikana village?"(? not really sure)
"huh?"

I saw a man with white eyes carrying a wood on his shoulder.(?)
he was too busy to talk and then he continued walking(?wtf)
On the contrary, somehow i was being stared around.(? OTL)

"I wonder if i said anything weird?"

The next person i asked without fail in the end did not know.(? . . . .)
I asked the next person and recieve the same response.(?)

"wh-what should i do?"

while i was on my way, words came into my ear(? sounds weird)

"first of all lets go to the adventurers guild"
"i wonder if there is any good quests, the dungeon here have been already

conquered a long time ago"(?)

Adventurer , dungeon.
after hearing those interesting words, i went after them.(?)