Tsuriotsu Impression

The plot are fairly good. From the superb prolouge written by Ou Jackson and in to the main story was quite enjoyable. Everydaylife is fun since it involve comedy most of times. The After Story is not just merely after story. it continue from the end of the route and reveal many thing while still have the main case from the common and heroine route. The real settlement of the main case is on after story. Thus the end of the route or the end of the tsuriotsu itself lies in the After Story, so after story is a must. Though I personally find that lack of tension most of times and just keeping me with the comedy because the common route itself is pretty long with less case until you enter the heroine route in which the real deal begin.

The writing, especially for the prolouge part was indeed amazing, sasuga Ou Jackson. I find it intriguing especially during Jeanne and Yuusei scene. And when it enter the main story in which Ou Jackson no longer write it, it would feels quite diferent and i find it nothing special afterward. It certainly didn't create the same reading vibe as the prolouge. Another thing is the presentation of Ursule Broken Japanese is quite well written here, adding more feel to the joke lol. Also the amount of the text displayed is also too much, especially for the normal dailylife context with no critical explanatory.

All characters are great. Especially Luna, she's just too good and sometimes she can switch to her S mode, but she's actually kind and caring, and is a good wife material. The rest character are quite interesting too. Even i would say that all character here are totally interesting, no one is boring. Damn even i'm quite interested on Minato in which i find this kind of character boring in many cases. Also another great character for me are Ion. The way he win an argument and silence or intimidating every oponent is just too damn good, also his line was probably the most anticipated than any other character here. His way of speaking are his another charm. He's the real deal character here i tell ya.

Character development is great, though in the common route doesn't gain much of char development, it gain a significant of development when you starting to enter the heroine route. After Story just make it even better and deep.

The visual art is amazing. All character and background design is well done. Even though there are various illustrator working on this, it doesn't make the characters feels too "stray" from each other, in fact it make the characters has diversity.

The BGM is good. I would give more appraise for the BGM that play every time Ion appear lol.

So overall, this VN is good. It's interesting and enjoyable but there are things that i can't enjoy either, particularly in the common route where all that keep me up was mostly the comedy and Luna.