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- Novice Review:
- Really great concept, but theres some stuff i think you could work on before ranking up!
- Your terrain is good, and i like the overhanging ledge. Its a good use of space and dynamic terrain. The rest of your terrain isnt too smooth and i like that. Its good for realism.
- Your structures are okay, but theres not really much to them. All of the walls are blank and theyre all generally the same. Try to make them a bit bigger so that you can add more detailing and depth to them and make them more unique. You could also maybe try to make a house that is being ripped by the tornado. Just a thought :p
- Your organics are decent, though the tops of the trees are rather spherical. Rough them up a bit and misshapen them more. It could also be a cool idea if there was a tree or two being pulled in by the tornado. Idek :p
- Finally, theres a lot of empty space on the plot, so try and fill it up as best you can!
- Good luck!
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