QC for the curious

01: Scoot left slightly.

03:

p3, b2: It's fine we're both girls -> (Add a comma, or add "because" / "since")

04:

p3, b3: (not sure of the repetition of "talk about")

p3, b5: but I can't help get so... -> (but I can't help getting so...)

p4, b2: ... -> (reshape as, and add period) and / I want / to turn / into their / wall** and / watch / them for- / ever.

05:

p2, b1: (add period, scoot a little right.)

p4, b1-2: ...
p5, b2: Yes, I am. -> (could squish this width a bit to fit nicer.)

07, b1: (add period)

p1, b4: You see, one... -> (of my friend's daughter's(?). I'm not nerdy enough to know.)

p2, b2: Although what will ... -> (Although, ...)

p2, aside: ... -> (would look better with "a" on not its own line.)

p3, b4: The first session... -> (reshape as) The first / session / was a / quiet / one.

p4, b1: I was relieved... -> (think the lining can be improved, but more importantly "when it came to her studies" is very wordy. Alternatives:

I was relieved to find out that she was quite studious.

I was relieved to find out she was an excellent student.

08, b1: ... -> ("why" seems redundant)

p1, b3: Um... -> (perhaps scoot left just slightly)

p4, b2: Hiyori-chan started... -> (reshape as) Hiyori- / chan / started / watch- / ing live / streams, / too.

09:

p4, b2: Let's go on... -> (maybe squish "together" width-wise)

10:

p1, aside: Being overly self-... -> (self-conscious)

p3, b1: But I also... -> (reshape as) But I also / haven't / hung out / with some- / one alone

p3, b2: since I was... -> (squish "school" as much as possible, and squish the "!!" so that they lie next to each other. Should give enough space to center this well.)

11:

Last bubble: (would be nice to move the hearts down and to the right, then center as possible)

12:

p2, b2: ? What's wrong? -> (move down slightly)

13:

p3, b1: (add period)

p6, b2: Huh? -> (could definitely center more in the second "bubble")

15:

p3, b1: Hiyori-chan, your -> (reshape as) Hiyori- / chan, your / lips are / chapped.

16, b2: (add punctuation)

17, b1: (add punctuation)

18 b1: Are you looking... -> (reshape as) Are / you look- / ing at / some- / thing?

19:

p2, b3: Really? You're so... -> (reshape as) Really? / You're / so thought- / ful.

Last bubble: (make this bold, maybe)

20:

p4, b2: I would have... -> (could squish this to fit nicer)

21:

p1, b3: Besides, I'm happy... -> (reshape as) ... / to have / fun to- / gether.

22, p1, b1-2: (capital letter after no punctuation)

23:

Last bubble: Could be bigger / bolded, with another hyphen.

24: (remove the Discord stuff)

p3, b1: Even though we are... -> (Even though we're...)

p4, b2: (could be a bit bigger)

p6, b1: (could be a bit bigger)

27:

p3, b1: Miss Akira, you're... -> (reshape as) Miss / Akira, / you're / so cute. / Very / cute.

32:

p1, b1: (scoot right a little)

p1, b2: (could be a bit bigger / bold)

33:

p1, b1: (could squish a little)

p2, b1: (could squish last line a little)

p3, b1: I will do... -> (I'll do...)

34, aside: to buy you... -> To buy you...