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- Hello Potus_82!
- My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. Lets start of with your structure.
- Your structure is lacking depth and detail. I would like to see more structures on your plot as well based on the space you have and how small this one is. ./warp depthtutorial for extra help. Your bridge is also pretty plain and dull. try to add pot holes or railing for a more realistic effect. I like how u added the hanging glowstone thou.
- Your trees are bonemealed and are frowned upon. Remove them and make custom trees. The words on your plot dont really help it and lessen your space.
- Your terrain is decent but could use some work. Try to add more blocks for color and variation. Your river is nice and smooth but make the bottom sand/sandstone for a more appealing look. add some sugar cane and flowers around it to enhance the detailing.
- OVerall, Your plot needs some work and I dont think you changed much based off of the other mods reviews. Try to work on that. Good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D
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