A story that I save on A03 part 3

from /hhg/ Helluva Hotel General #889, #909, #913. #918, #921 Cheerleader Edition., #923, #925, #935, #939, #946
part 1: https://pastebin.com/MjcSVfmX
part 2: https://pastebin.com/MKZfLwWf
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It's time.

https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/42586600/#42609300

It might be a fay thing to do, but for some context, I listened to this while writing it.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h3z8DnS_0eg
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>It might be a fay thing to do, but for some context, I listened to this while writing it.

no it's not, I do that as well.

also I am listing to this and reading this story as well... it giving me the feels.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ysPtBjY8o_A
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>>42609367

And that, my boys, is the end of Scuba Steves story.

>>42609410
Good music. Goes along with it really well.
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>And that, my boys, is the end of Scuba Steves story.

good story dude

>>>42609410
>Good music. Goes along with it really well.

thanks dude

here the save: https://archiveofourown.org/works/33482902/chapters/86338966

now what next for you?...
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Great taste, Nacho Libre is based.
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>now what next for you?...

Committing war crimes in Bosnia for fun and profit.

Or maybe the other side of this story. While Scuba Steve was running amok, he was being hunted once found. Maybe writing about the main cast characters and their actions in the entire thing. But, for now, nothing. IRL makes things hard to do.
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>But, for now, nothing. IRL makes things hard to do.

ah sht, hope you can get some free time/thing get easy for you anon.
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So I've been wondering, hell in hazbin is pretty basic to human existence basically and has a set reality. Warhammer has th warp. Aka the ever changing nonsense landscape. So it makes me wonder if there is a warp like place in hazbin. Where the most fked go and it's not tameable.
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>>42609821
It's all good anon. Who knows, maybe I'll write Scuba Steve PT-2. For now, time for work. I have some ideas brewing for Steve now, so we'll see.

>>42609909
Thank you for the idea Anon.
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>time for work. I have some ideas brewing for Steve now, so we'll see.

nice
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have a good day at work, anon.
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I mean demons and sinners who die in hell by angellic weapons are supposed to release 'evil energy' which is the thing that makes all the buildings and furniture have eyes. There's probably some void where all that energy is stored in
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Where is that wrote anywhere?
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Sounds like bs
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I remember writing a story about two orks taking a wrong turn at the warp and ending up at the hotel.
It was called "The Gang Meets Two Orks and Somehow Nobody Dies" or something like that.
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I save that

https://pastebin.com/Mpgdk0Fe
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I'm back.
Let's get this started back up.

https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/42958184/#42958930
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>Scuba Steve
Is that a Big Daddy reference?
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Yes. The name stuck because the guy originally worse scuba gear in. I wasn't going to name him, but people kept calling him scuba steve. I went with it and here we are.
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Nice
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https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/43013316/#43024258
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I'm a fan of complete shtshows in fiction. So you can guess where this is going.

https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/43105099/#43107917

That's all for now, folks. Enjoy. And please post criticism.
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More.

https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/43189782/#43232463

And that's that. Any feedback is appreciated.
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I’m not that into the story, not that it’s bad, I just find it hard to care about the protagonist since he’s kinda boring. I wanna see people interacting with the other characters of the show, I’m not into the weird Shield type origination or whatever you have going on here. Have a weird officer of heaven having trouble adapting to hell, give them personality beyond reactionary “Oh sht, oh f-k.”. It’s definitely not bad, but it’s boring, try and spice it up with character interactions that has actual interesting dialogue and comedy. Your a decent writer just make it more fun to read for people and they will love ya.
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Much appreciated. I'm writing this mostly to improve my own writing, so, I'll try to take your advice to heart as much as I can, though I was already planning a lot of character interaction in the up and coming chapters.
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here's the dead space
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https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/43266655/#43290845

And there we go. Feedback is appreciated, since I'm writing this with the goal of improving my writing. Hope you enjoyed.
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https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/43316285/#43319136

Hope you all enjoyed. As always, any feedback is appreciated.
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Good sht so far, also what gun does Steve have?
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It's not really a spoiler, but In the original story I imagined his submachine gun was a homemade Luty submachine gun. And the pistol here, just being the cheapest sht hipoint he could find. Lack of funds and all. I planned on him upgrading over time, so, maybe then I can truly reveal my gun autism.
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I see, thank you.

>Inb4 Steve winds up with a BFG 9001 a few upgrades later.
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Life is hard. So, here's the late chapter.

https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/43591086/#43631246

There we go, hope you enjoy even more story set up.
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https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/43745497/#43748460

More set up. I know it's not the most interesting thing to get posted, but it'll pay off if all goes to plan. I hope you enjoyed none the less.
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https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/43865869/#43866373

So, Scuba Steve part 2 is going slow. Life makes it that way unfortunately.
This is the beginning of the real story arc. Hope you enjoy.