xDraghun

Syiotic Plot Review

Jul 19th, 2015
203
0
Never
Not a member of Pastebin yet? Sign Up, it unlocks many cool features!
text 0.76 KB | None | 0 0
  1. Hello Syiotic!
  2.  
  3. My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. I wanna point out that your plot lacks a lot of effort. Your plot needs structure,organics, and terrain to rank up. You have no organics and your structure/terrain is pretty flat.
  4.  
  5. Your structure lacks a lout of detail and depth and is pretty small compared to all your extra space. refer to ./warp depthtutorial for extra help.
  6.  
  7. Your terrain is pretty flat and hills are pretty small based on your space. I know your plot is suppose to be a cemetery, but try and put a lot more effort into it. Make it more dark and brooding.
  8.  
  9. Overall, Your plot needs a lot of work and effort put into it before I can rank u up. Good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D
Advertisement
Add Comment
Please, Sign In to add comment