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- Hello Syiotic!
- My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. I wanna point out that your plot lacks a lot of effort. Your plot needs structure,organics, and terrain to rank up. You have no organics and your structure/terrain is pretty flat.
- Your structure lacks a lout of detail and depth and is pretty small compared to all your extra space. refer to ./warp depthtutorial for extra help.
- Your terrain is pretty flat and hills are pretty small based on your space. I know your plot is suppose to be a cemetery, but try and put a lot more effort into it. Make it more dark and brooding.
- Overall, Your plot needs a lot of work and effort put into it before I can rank u up. Good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D
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