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- Hey there! :3
- Firstly, terrain.
- I like the dynamics you have in the terrain a lot. Lots of layers, lots of colour! It looks really nice and fits with the theme really well! It's a nice looking fantasy feel, and you have some lovely atmosphere around the plot (Especially with the settings set how you wanted them :p)
- Only thing I would suggest would be on the stone texture, mix in another block type with it - that way there's more detail in the terrain.
- I would also suggest having the 'grass' area, or in this case mycelium area, coming down into the cliffs a little more.
- Eg: https://i.imgur.com/BftPQ94.jpg
- Notice how the dirt comes over the stone a little more? Just makes the change less sudden.
- Secondly, organics.
- I love the mushrooms you have, however mushrooms don't have the edges hanging over like you've made them. (The single strands coming down, I mean). Mushrooms are rounder in shape on top.
- Eg: https://imgur.com/0tklU0D
- That being said, I like the addition of the mushrooms, because it really works with the theme you were going for.
- Lastly, structure.
- Although I like the idea of the mushroom huts on the top of the cliff, I think they're a little too organic to be structures. The block types make them that way, I think. If I were you, I would use the same style you used on the house on the bottom level, because that separates from the organics palette and the terrain palette (apart from the roof block; I would change that up a bit, so it's not mycelium on every house)
- A few more of these houses, and maybe a slightly larger one somewhere, would be great!
- Good luck!
- - Dutty :3
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