xDraghun

GUMMYDAGREAT Plot Review

Jul 18th, 2015
221
0
Never
Not a member of Pastebin yet? Sign Up, it unlocks many cool features!
text 1.38 KB | None | 0 0
  1. Hello GUMMYDAGREAT!!
  2.  
  3. My name is xDraghun and I will reviewing your plot today. Lets start of with your structure.
  4.  
  5. Your structure, as of now, is a plain quartz box with very little detail/depth. The quartz pillars adds some detail, but very little. I like the little gate and the stonebrick road going to your main structure but they could have some detail added aswell. Try using stonebrick slabs/stairs to your build for color, detail and depth. If you need a reference too, go to /warp depthtutorial.
  6.  
  7. You trees are really nice and I love how they are custom and you made the to be like willow trees. maybe next time you could add branches and roots to them. In my opinion, I dont think birch trees would be a good match when altered into a willow tree. I know you tried to match the white of the tree to the structure but it doesnt really work. You should try oak or spruce. It is nice though how you added so many trees to your plot.
  8.  
  9. A majority of your terrain is pretty flat excluding the hill. Try adding other blocks for color and variation such as gravel, green clay, dirt. Your hill/mini waterfall is nice and compliments your plot well though.
  10.  
  11. Overall your plot still needs some work done. You have so much extra space on it that you just bonemealed over. Try to use all of your space to the best of your ability. Good Luck and I hope you have better chances with your next submission! :D
Advertisement
Add Comment
Please, Sign In to add comment