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Ranka: Ranka Just now.
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Juri: Though I'm dead serious about crushing Torayamachi.
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Ao: And that's where all the undercover Janomiya members will shine~
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Magical Girl A: ... From Ryuugasahi.
--> typo of Ryuugasaki (change the h to a k)

Yuna: There are three bridges between Torayamachi and Ryuugasaki territory. @West Oogibashi, East Oogibashi, and Monzenbashi.
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Sakuya: I'm done setting the gems here. @West Oogibahi is done, too.
--> typo of Oogibashi (add an s before the h)

Sakuya: are we expecting them to come in through @Monzanbashi?
--> typo of Monzenbashi (change the 1st a to an e)


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Juri: [chara:304400:effect_emotion_surprise_0][se:7226_shock]Well, @Juri the Great is going with two teams of nine!
--> remove the shock effects here, it's only supposed to be for Ranka's line afterward

Juri: You really think we can take Torayamachi by surprise @like that?
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Juri: If Torayamachi is really expecting us to come through @the central bridge,
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507409-9_kwjKV
Magical Girl: To-Torayamachi... Everyone's stressed out over there...
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Ranka: Maybe Torayamachi is right about witches coming back.
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Ranka: Torayamachi trying to spy on us like that proves they're willing to fight.
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Hikaru: Since I deserted Ryuugasaki, it has to be Torayamachi.
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Ao: Janomiya was originally formed by refugees from other gangs.
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Ao: Ryuugasaki is going to attack Torayamachi in two days~
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Ao: (It won't be long before Torayamachi makes their move, too. I'd better let the team know right away.)
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To "accept" Torayamachiu's directions, or to "ignore" them?@By accepting them, the gears went awry...
--> typo of Torayamachi (remove the u)


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Ao: I'm pretty sure that's whar Juri's wanted@from the start~
--> typo of what (change the r to a t)


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Yuna: This is where the final battle is@going to be fought...
--> For some reason after choosing the top choice, this next dialogue is covered by a black screen. But by the next line the black slides away. It seems fine when I put in the original jp json though.


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Ao: (This isn't guerilla warefare...it's@just a massacre...)
--> typo of warfare (remove the 1st e)

How do you use the gems that Ryuugasaki@had already found out about?@By "changing" the possition or "leaving them be",@the gears of fate would have moved@in a very different direction.
--> typo or position (remove one s)


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The girls lurking in Ryuugasaki and Torayamachiu,@by "bringing them along" or "leaving them",@the gear that decided the battle@would move in a very different direction.
--> typo of Torayamachi (remove the u)


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Juri: I knew this would happen, since everyone's faith was in @my strength.
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Ao: (And I can see that Kureha Yuna and Hikaru really @care about Janomiya...)
Ao: Chizu Ranka... the second in command of Monzenbashi...
--> change Kureha Yuna to Yuna Kureha & Chizu Ranka to Ranka Chizu since the rest of the story has the names in firstname lastname order

Hikaru: The other Janomiya girls are there now, you know? And Yuna's waiting for you too!
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Yuna: I think for now, we should let her do what she wants, so she can sort her feelings out.
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Ao: If Torayamachi and Ryuugasaki are going to talk things out, I think we should wait and see what happens~
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Ao: Even if it doesn't seem like it, I believe in Torayamachi @and Hikaru for now~
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Ryuugasaki Girl: You went out of your way to come to me with the leader of Janomiya, huh? Are you just here to show off how strong your gang is now?
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???: You worked hard to make last night's fight the final one, just like you promised. That wasn't wrong, neither was trying to negotiate with them.
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???: There's someone who's always at your side, pushing forward along with you. You have to believe in her.
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Juri: It's been a while since the last battle, and my wounds have been healing, slowly but steadily.
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Juri: Even now, I'm always thinking about defeating Yuna. I don't like the idea of Torayamachi ruling all of Futatsugi.
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Juri: If you still haven't decided between Torayamachi or Ryugasaki, I have one last thing to tell you, if you'll come to listen.
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Juri: I'm not trying to gather you all in one place so I can kill you all. I mean, I still haven't recovered enough to take you all on, so don't worry about that.
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Hikaru: You're just upset that your gang fell for Torayamachi's plan.
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Ao: If anything, I'm excited that I can finally put an end to it all.
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Ranka: You regret having to join a gang that someone you hate so much is a member of
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Ranka: and had to get along with her without being able to kill her.
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Ao: After being beat so many times... being stolen from so many times...
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Ranka: : [surround:1012A03][chara:304400:effect_7003_damage02][bgEffect:shakeSmall]Ugh...!
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Ranka: But you're the ones who are going to get locked up this time.
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Ryuugasaki Girl: Torayamachi's horse, don't you have something more important to do than fighting alongside Ao here?
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Hikaru: When I was in Janomiya, I promised Ao that I'd protect her no matter what!
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Hikaru: But we talked to the Ryuugasaki girls and they agreed to cooperate!
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Ranka: You can't just take what they said at face value. There's more going on behind the scenes than you realize.
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Ao: You pledged to protect Yuna first, and she's in danger right now.
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Hikaru: ... I'll save Yuna no matter what. So please, stay alive for me.
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Juri: Looks like the goddss of victory is on Juri the Great's side.
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Janomiya Girl: As Janomiya, we'll achieve our peace of mind together, right!?
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Hikaru: @That's right, I'm Yuna's strongest spear and shield. @I'll protect her with my life!
Yuna: @Hikaru...
Juri: @I didn't expect anyone to interfere...
Juri: @Hey, if you're the strongest spear and shield both, @isn't that a contradiction?
Hikaru: @Only if the two oppose each other. @But if one person has both, it means they're unstoppable!
Juri: @Huh? What's with that logic? @Torayamachi's Fang and Horse... you two are ridiculous...
Juri: @Fine, come at me. Juri the Great's flames are still burning!
--> for these, put the —speaker name— things before the 1st line breaks


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Juri: Horse, take her back home. Run away to Torayamachi.
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Ao: A few days later, a mentally exhausted Yuna suffered a crushing defeat against Juri and became a Witch. Hikaru defeated the witch, before becoming one herself.
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Ao: The meaningless battle left every Magical Girl in Futatsugi City with a feeling of unease.
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Ao: Ryuugasaki never found out why the witches vanished. Without anyone to fight against, they just barely scrape by each day in the city where countless Magical Girls had been culled.
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The reason why witches disappeared has been the biggest mystery of all to the Futatsugi Magical Girls. Whether or not Yuna decides to investigate it further will cause the gears of fate to move in a different direction.
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Torayamachi Girl: Their objective was the release of Magical Girls. In other words, to save them from their fate of becoming witches.
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Torayamachi Girl: To do that, they protected the Rumors of the city and captured witches.
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Torayamachi Girl: But, instead of transforming to witches, they were able to summon what was called a Doppel.
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Torayamachi Girl: The city had become heaven on earth for Magical Girls. There, you never turn into a witch, even if you don't fight them.
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Torayamachi Girl: I joined the group as a Black Feather, one of the low-level members, so I wasn't told exactly how everything worked. I was just a pawn for the sake of the release of Magical Girls.
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Torayamachi Girl: I didn't learn the truth until the day Eve went out of control and Walpurgisnacht arrived in the city, which caused the disaster you mentioned.
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Torayamachi Girl: After that, the Magius fell apart, and all their secrets were revealed. That was when I learned the truth...
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Yuna: The voices of the girls we lost... they're echoing inside my head right now...
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Yuna: -Yuna- @Our vow to exact revenge on Kamihama, sworn in the blood shed by our fallen comrades.
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