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- Hey this is Jewsef and I'll be reviewing your plot :D
- Alright to start off, I will be talking about your terrain. Terrain is a very essential part of any build and if done right, it can help the build a lot, in terms of both atmosphere and look. Okay so I see you tried to do different styles of terrain but this unfortunately wont get you anywhere, you need much more. Add more cliffs, mountains, hills, etc.. you have the space for it, so why not?
- For your structure, I like it, however, it's the same exact one copy -> pasted. Also, there's no depth or detail into it, it's just the shape that is good. Try to fix that, add more layers to your walls and define it's shape using slabs/stairs. And to rank up, you definitely need to use more styles and add more buildings m8.
- Finally, for your organics, I don't see anything besides trees. Maybe add more Plants/Animals to your plot. Your trees need a bit of work. Try to make them bigger and more curvy, Also, add branches to make it look realistic.
- Hope this helps and good luck!
- ~ Regards, Jewsef.
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