Tayter_Kat

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Jul 15th, 2015
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  1. Hello there samsssssssss, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your novice plot...
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  3. Structure:
  4. This is anything from towers to houses to castles. I see you have a few buildings, and they have a good amount of depth. For future reference, some mods may get after your builds because they are to random and the depth is a bit confusing. Make sure it is clean and that the depth makes sense. You can also try to make the roofs more interesting instead of just a flat or stair roof pattern.
  5. Terrain:
  6. This is anything involving the ground, like cliffs and hills. Your terrain has a nice idea, but it is very boxy. Try smoothing it our a bit. Also, there are some areas that are completely flat. Try adding hills and craters on those areas to fix the flatness.
  7. Organics:
  8. This is anything living, like trees and animals. Your trees are alright, but for future reference, make sure the branches aren't so thick.
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  10. Good Lick!!!<3
  11. Tayter_Kat | Octovon Mod
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