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- Novice Review:
- The structure on the plot is getting better but there still needs to be more, and preferably bigger ones as well! The trees are nice so far and the terrain is okay, though it looks a bit weak so try and support it more and make it feel more sturdy. The random glass balls and snakes all over the plot make little to no sense, so if youre going to keep them, try and be sure to have what they are clearly stated.
- Good luck!
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