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-Well, somehow it appears you are destined to do something great, otherwise you'd probably be dead before this even began. You are driven by some reason to make ends meet, or to make ends tear in the end of the world, or perhaps even conquer the end over all the odds, and maybe even the world. In the wide world of Amaranth currently, there is quite the number of events all piling up to bring about the end of time, and as a mercenary, you're up for hire, and plenty of people need your assistance! Currently, you folk are in the province of Oakran, helping the Holy Knights hunt down an unholy abomination that has been plaguing the city of Ysmirath from the woods and corrupting the beasts within. Large cracks have appeared in the ground, covered in an odd dark purple liquid that seens to be corrupting the land.
+Name: Avon Tyrel
 
 Race: Human
-Name: (What's your name?)
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 Religion: Accepts the gods for who they are, but doesn't really care for paying any lip service to them. He respects the righteous ones, nonetheless.
-Race: (What are you?
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 Magic: Kinda. Uses a form of magic that does simple party tricks, e.g transform water to wine. Can belch fire after drinking booze, and release mist of alcoholic fog. (Thats all i really want)
-Religion: (Who's your holy/unholy lord, if any?)
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 Equipment: Large hand-and-a-half sword that he's trained to properly swing with one hand, lamellar plate armour with a steel face mask depicting a snarling beast, complete with a large red plume.
-Magic: (Do you have epic mind powers?)
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 Artifact: Bottomless Flask; filled to the brim with spirits.
-Equipment: (Talk to DM)
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 Age: 24
-Artifact: (None unless DM gives consent, but you can come up with your own and suggest.)
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 Personality: Muh'balance. On a serious note, Avon is a really relaxed and easygoing guy -- even when drunk, he maintains a calm and composed demeanor. He has a habit of being oblivious to what he says sometimes, especially when it comes to humour.
-Age: (Dependant on Race)
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 What is your goal?: World peace
-What is your goal?:
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 Appearance: Somewhat average height, about 5'8 tall with a broad shouldered, stocky frame and somewhat tanned skin. He has brown, typical slanted(e.g Asian im sorry im racist to my ancestry) eyes and somewhat soft features for a man, yet carries a bit of ruggedness due to the facial hair he grows(which he typically keeps shaved) Hair is black, flows a bit down near his shoulders.
-Appearance: (what do you look like)
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-Backstory: (what is your life story?)
+Backstory: Young Avon Tyrel was pretty much just a young baby found by a small monastery of monks, who taught him their glorious ways. They believed in a state of balance that would bring the world peace. Tl;Dr Avon eventually left the monastery with intent on either spreading peace himself or finding a proper 'prophet' to help him in doing so.
 
-Location: Ysmirath, Oakran.
+Location: With the party?
 
-Skills (you have 100 points)
+Skills (You get 10 points) (This is only to give me an idea of what your character excels in, and will be put into an actual system, and used. There are advantages and disadvantages to everything, so be careful :^)
-Wisdom: 0 (How effective your spells are)
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-Intelligence: 0 (How many spell uses you have and general knowledge check)
+Magic: 0
-Vitality: 0 (How durable you are)
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-Faith: 0 (How much your god loves you)
+Intelligence: 0
-Endurance: 0 (How long until you tire.)
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-Strength: 0 (How strong you are)
+Strength: should be at least a 2 tbh but :(
-Dexterity: 0 (How fast and agile you are, along with stealth)
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-Luck: 0 (Charisma, random chance, better loot)
+Dexterity: 5
 
 Charisma: 5
 
 Luck:0
 
 Drunken fighting buffs? If there is any