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[Crunchyroll]
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*00:14 - Style(minor) / Translate "Ayakashi" or add TL note.
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*00:17 - Literal(minor) / "celebrity complex" -> "luxury condo/apartment"
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*00:38 - Context(minor) / "It's been that way since I was little[...]"
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00:57 - Error(negligible) / I can't help but put [...] people."
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*01:28 - Error(minor) / "Don't worry about me."
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**01:42 - Error, WTF / "And join your stupid clique?", "I'm not desperate for friends"... anything but the original line.
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*2:12 - Dodge(minor) / "That's the official cover for it."
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*2:50 - Context(minor) / Worst case, italicize "Thank you", a sarcastic sounding liberal TL here would be nice.
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05:09 - Consistency(negligible)
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 / "Such kind words!"
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**05:30 - Context / "Don't bother!", "No, thanks!"
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*07:37 - Literal / "Don't give me that sad puppy look!"
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*08:05 - Error(minor) / "What you're doing even exceeds
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 that."
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08:14 - Literal(arguable, recurring) / "[...] trained dog?"
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*11:10 - Literal(minor) / "Oh, where's my manners?", talking about forgetting self-intro, not first reaction.
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**11:17 - Context(quirk) / vs 10:54
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**14:04 - Error / "I think my childhood experience triggered{OR was the source of} my bad habit."
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*15:39+15:42 - Error(recurring, Consistency) / "I can't let him flatter me." "If I get flattered, I'd only hurt myself in the end."
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**17:30 - Error, lol / "We're {genuine }human beings."
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*18:55 - Detail, Nuance(minor) / "Do you really want to be tied to a collar?"
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*19:13 - Error(minor) / "tip of the nail" -> "toe"
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**22:02 - Error(minor on critical line) / "It was the beginning of a long, long tale."
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[Commie], Difference vs CR.
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-08:14
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-14:04 - Downgrade to minor, better nuance.
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-15:39+15:42
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-22:02
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[EveTaku]
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[EveTaku], Ep2
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4:20 - Context (arguable): "We'll see how long he will last." - It sounds like a "sharp tongue" comment implying he'll eventually mess up or that she doesn't believe in his ability to handle the job.
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*7:22 - Mishearing (minor): "Onee-chan" -> "Onee-san".
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*17:22 - Liberal (minor): "This strike probably won't kill you," - Does not imply it's immortal from the line.